wow, i loved this piece very much. most people overlook the years that jaken and sesshomaru have spent together, and i like how this isn't about romance but some twisted version of friendship, or understanding. thanks for sharing!

When I clicked on this story, I had no idea what to expect. I was pleasantly suprised. This little story is very deep and beautifully written.

Oh dear. That wasn't at all what I was expecting, and yet so much *better* than what I was expecting. It was wonderful insight on immortality... if you can't die, then are you really alive?

Sesshomaru is portrayed perfectly. I love it, and I'll be sure to check out your other fics.

-Inverse-chan

I honestly adore it. Everything said was very true... even if one doesn't realize it at first. A nicely told little story that left me without mny words (why this review is so spacey).

That's so beautiful...

It's amazing...

I cried and I've only cried when someone dies or is in pain in fan fictions...

That is utterly and completely awe-inspiring.

I really, really thought that your humor was the best, but now that I've finally read one of your more serious ones...

I think you leave all the other authors in the dust...

Go you! You are SO good! .

Keep writing.

I am speechless. Well, not really. How old are you? You are so very wise, it would occur to me that you are not a teenager. This story...goes so beyond the bounds of "deep" or "meaningful" that I am struck with a sense of stupidity. How can you see things that others cannot? Your analogies and examples just blow me away.

But, for your summary, when you put (JakenxSesshoumaru) I thought it was going to be some disgusting slash or something. But it was quite yet pleasantly surprising. It was amazing, beautiful, and by far the best story i have ever read. And believe me, I have gotton around. This was the best, by far. I thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of the world. You have great potential.

Sincerely,

Unheard_Screms

I like how you get into Sesshoumaru's mind. Very nicely done.

Every word has so much depth, that I believe, is the beauty of the abstract, and in this story you absoultely nailed it. It's very thought provoking, and there is a tragic element to it, but in the end there is this sense of contentment. It is way out-of-ordinary, and the beauty in this tale is just exhilirating. Lovely, unique, the best of its kind!

I have no recourse but to praise you. Your system of interlocking analogies is quite innovative and suprisingly relevant. Unlike virtually every other story that personifies Sesshoumaru, Anthology doesn't anthropomorphisize him. It delves into inhuman psychology, embracing the incomprehensible mindset of an immortal, supernatural creature. It's the one romance I've yet to read in which I can revel in each word and reread the sentences time again and not tire of them.

This is the most abstractfic you've ever written. I like the insight.

That was very deep and introspective. I liked the very ending the best because it's so true. The story was so scattered and then you wrapped it all up in a perfect little bundle with just a few words.

Well done. Very well done.

I love the philosophy. How it all follows a pattern and converges to make utter sense? Thank you for such an outstanding read- I haven't the words right now to praise it properly.

Nice. I don't really know what to say, other than it was peaceful to read this.