It was great Captain!

What? You asked me to!

Anyways, it is a great story. J'onn is my favorite character.

Not much else to say, other than amazing story again.

"It was great, Captain!"

Ok, all facetiousness aside, I did actually like it very much. You looked into the characterisation and brought out what you found, without trying to soften anything. Well done.

I loved this.

Anything with J'onn is cool, and I loved how you showed his perpesctive on things. He seemed more fragile and human in this peice and it was great. :)

“It was great, Captain!”

and i mean it hope there is more