Well... That's awkward. Oh River. Hahaha

So yeah. Fabulously well written, and with a complementary oh-shit-wtf? moment to cap it all off. Imagery-wise, I especially liked the part about River's reflection. This is a wonderfully twisted little piece of writing.

this is really good. it sounds like after River watches Simon Kaylee at the end of serenity...tisk tsk! have fun, its good! write more plz!

Nice, short, different for sure. Incredibly interesting, to be honest, because it's such an off-the-wall sort of idea. Interesting concept- poor Kaylee.

man i've always hated simon

too damn protective, never letting kaylee hook up with river

tsk tsk

anyway, great fic :D

great kaylee/river

not particularily suprised at the simon thinking of river bit

just never liked that guy...

fantastic fic

Cool but creepy and alittle disconcerting! Is Simon like into his sister or is River just being her usual creepy self? I like the story! Very well written! VERY Well! Its very different! I like it! It really hits you and makes you blink! Good job!

Well that certainly brings up images. Not necessarily bad ones, but River's last line does freak me out just a little.

i agree that was very creepy. butthen again i am creepy to so i like it alot. i like Kaylee's reaction to everything. and river, but he doesn't ask sometimes, thats funny.

That was creppy, but that was what you were going for I bet. So good job. :)

I agree about the creepy, but the Simon/River relationship always had that element of creepiness, so well done.

Well written if a bit creepy.

I have to agree with the previous reviewer: creepy, yet somehow satisfying. Honestly, I hated it simply because the thought of Simon fondling Kaylee while thinking about River absolutely disgusts me. But at the same time, you had me totally engrossed until that last sentence.

Excellent writing, even if I dislike the conclusion. )

Now, that was downright creepifying. So, why did I love it so?