O_o Chisakami wants to kill Kel for insulting her? Crazy b!tch

awesome, but slightly gruesome...
Anyway, this really needs another chapter to finish.

Whoa.

Neal's not the only one with an "endless capacity for drama" as Duke Baird put it.

*takes on a teacherly/scholarly type voice and attitude*

Now, now Cleon don't kill Neal. That's not nice.

And basides, that's MY job. Later.

You are? I thought you were one of those "kill Cleon and play matchmaker with Kel and Neal or Kel and Dom or etc."

Must read on!

Actually, her name's Ilane. But it's no biggie.

Ooo, interesting. *sighs* I need a new catch phrase.

By the way, the man who works with the Wildcat is the Horse.

The Princess is Shinkokami

I also like your story. I just wanted to inform you. You must get alot of this.

Thank You for reading this

Shelly

No no no no no no no no no no no no ! So thats the end? No no no! How could that be the end? Grrr! So wait.. is Kel dead? I can't tell... And you killed Cleon! How could you! Wahhh! Your making me cry! Okay I screamed when you killed him and people looked at me really weird! Alright.. please r/r my story.. even though its only three chapters right now and not very good. Oh man I'm traumatized for life! Yikes! Whoa.. gonna go off to brood..

-Kylee

Ahhh! Torture! Torture! First, I must ask.. is WHY on Gods Green Earth did you have to put Joren in this story? *hiss* And second.. Kel is PREGNANT? wow! Okay.. I thought I wasn't gonna review this chapter but I had to steam my anger (yah right! lol) before I cooled down!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! ahhhh! Ooo oo this is sooooooo good! Awesome plot! Yeah! (Thank you Lily Fireheart for being a good writer and making me want to check your fav. stories and finding this one! lol) Ooooo this is good. Okay, I really am one of those annoying people that review every chapter.. the ones you wanna just strangle (though I wish people would do that for mine!) so I'll stop. Gonna go read the next chapter!

Woo! I love this story! I'm like all excited & freakin out and I'm getting strange looks but its really good! Thank you!

-Kylee aka Pandoras_Boxx

Yay! Thats so romantic..gonna make me cry. *sniffles*

Ooooo! Enter the love machine.. Mr. Neal (and Cleon!) Kool characters I know and love! This is really really good! Keep it up!

Really really good, though the chapters tend to be disappointingly short. But realllly good! (Better than the Daine one...) ha ha

-Kylee aka Boxx

I loved this! The Shang training Kel had to go through...Oh I would have killed Renna...hope you write more in the TT series!