better warning for use in the future. no offense this is only for laughs.
Warning: This chapter contains major amounts of fluff, you should not eat 1 hour prior to reading. Or 1 hour after reading. Heck you probably won't want to eat at all after reading.

the acronym or abbreviation you were thinking of is apb-all points bulletin nothing to do with oversized monkeys.

the guys should have been more shocked and reluctant to just leave Tempest

Tip Romance should be more awkward and what is with aquaguy and the floating beam?

(Well...I don't wanna sound mean...)I kinda got embarrassed..(Forgive my spelling if ever there is something wrong) of the name of the team...But it's GREAT ! My friend thought it was awesome though...Cannot wait for your next story !

yes. yes. yes, yes, yes, Y-E-S (dane cook reference, i couldnt help myself). this is some -cough- better -cough- stuff. longer, too, i like that. i have yet to read the third in your magnificent trilogy, (ill work on that tomorrow), but things are definitely looking up. i cant remember if i had anything to comment on... um... ok, yeah. good job.

That was great! I especially liked the part when the author comes out of nowhere with a boat! Keep on writing!

Hi! I'm just popping in to say that I read this story and its predecessor, and I think they are both very good, for a novice writer anyway. Hey, have you read my latest story, Alpha Force 2?

Awesome story! I can't wait till the next one! Team Dynamo rocks! I love the super twist Tony as Aquaguy and Sam as Floating Beam. Love twist especially since Mia loves horse. Cause I absolutly love horses!! Nice to see the Syndrome was in it. Maybe he'll be in another story! hint.. hint! ;)
Anyways super job I can't wait till the next one!!
Cheers,
Lydia

Pretty great ending! This story was awesome! I hope u write more Incredibles soon! I'm gonna read ur Incredible Outakes right now!! Bye for now!
-s.t.s.t

Aww, that was very cute. Very nice story. I love it. You do a great job with stories like this. Hope you write more.

That's...beautiful! (cries) Hold on! Let me get a tissue. (twenty minutes later) Very nice story. I don't mind you using the H.I.S. So far, only a few people used it and I didn't mind. Can't wait for your next story.

THIS WAS TOTALLY WICKED!! tony is actually pretty cool in this story, unlike in my imagination...(big jerk freak git...u get the point) awesome, excellent job, 'vi'!

PS i would read ur new story but i don't know what cyberchase is, so i'd be pretty confused. PLEASE PUT UP A NEW INCREDILES STORY, ur an AWESOME writer! ^_^

Will Vi and Tony ever make out? or better yet, will Tony be ok that is what is on my mind, i tried writing fanfics on The Incredibles, but its too good to write on that I just leave it to Disney and Pixar. But, somehow, you manage

Very nice! I can't wait for the next chapter.