This was different. I really really liked it. _

Yang

I liked the ending that was well done.

This is one of my all time favorite Laby fics! I remember reading it on the list ages ago and am so glad to find it all spiffed up. This is a beautiful piece that touches on a subject that needs to be recognized. Bravo for doing it so nicely.
I hope you don't mind, but I've printed this story out so I can read it anytime I like.

This is an excellent story. Good characterizations of both parties - I love how Jareth still sounds menacing even when he's offering comfort - very much in character for him! Thanks so much for sharing this one. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.

I love this idea. I read it over and over again. Children are precious to those without any (or few).

*winces* *sighs* I'm glad they're happy now.

I really liked this. It was interesting. I haven't seen anything like it before. I look forward to reading more of your work soon! *grins* *glomps author* *waves*
Later yo,
Icy

ooh. how sweet! _ ah, i loved it! *sighs* i wish i could write cool like this.

dark? only in the begining, you certainly let jareth light it up. *goes lookin gfor a sequal* please let there be one. this is so good.

Very, very nice.

Hey, this is good...very, very interesting twist on the family dynamics. Excellent work (Jareth speeding up the clock so she can't make it good thing!)

This was a lovely albeit sad story, may I request a sequel?. . .and should I do so would you write it?

*dabs her eyes with a Kleenex and blows her nose really loudly* Wow, this is the first fic that's brought tears to my eyes in quite a while. It's so sad and so good. You captured Jareth so well, and the way you portrayed Sarah's strength...*sniffles* 'Nuff said.

That's a very good story.

Really wonderful. An entirely new perspective on the relationship of Sarah and Jareth...nicely done!