Hehehe, this story is major cool!! And funny too (Rinoa and Squall bit) hope you finish this soon because I can't wait!!Jenny

Cool! you watch too match TV!!! I love it!!! It's a good story! I like the plot! Tell me more about the guys...(can you put me up with one of them? How about Aylmer?? Wait, Ken might do...)

Haven't read all of this yet, but it's going fine, i'll read it AFTER jap and ipt

Ummm, I don't want you to take this the wrong way ok? Chapter 1 was good, but if you wanted to make chapter 2 into a humor fic that was the way to do it. I don't like fics that aren't humor, and have the characters WAY OOC. Try to make it maybe so that in the future, they mature a lot, and they act like their old selves. I think that that would make this fic a lot more popular. That's just my opinion and advice, take it or leave it, but I'll keep reading this story!