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David Fishwick
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abuseCool story and I liked this. Thanks for writing.
yummy0o0
2005-06-24
ch 1,
abuseaw omg this is totally awesome! :)
Anna
2005-06-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it.
crystalix
2005-06-01
ch 1,
abuseOMG! AWESOME STORY! It's REALLY well written and I love the letter too! It's sweet and fluffity and awe! Lol, I can't even tell you how many parts I like about it, It's amazing, you're a great writer, super job! :D :D :D
Buffy9-27
2005-05-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseWOW!!I love the story!!It has a good setting and plot!!Hope you write more soon!!:)
WhiteWolf 3
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abuseThe cookie-analogue was cute.

I like your story.
TrudiRose
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abuseThat's very sweet! (One thing: the fact that Angel is a vampire doesn't mean he doesn't eat cookies. On "Buffy", vampires do eat if they want to - remember, Spike loves blooming onions and buffalo wings.)
boeketjebloemen
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abuseI love this story! please please please make more chapters, I'd love to see where this might go next.
MsHellFire2005
2005-05-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it you are a very tallented writer i hope that you will update soon or at least write soneting new
thekorapersonality
2005-05-24
ch 1,
abusem it has cookies. Cookies make the world a better place.
I like that Buffy realizes that she'll never be "done." It's a very mature realization and quite a difficult one to come to when you're still growing up. Which we always are. *sniff*
Are you going to do more? of course it works as a one-shot, but I'd love to see a mature!Buffy try to start back up again with Angel.
Black Shadow Fox
2005-05-24
ch 1, anon.
abusevery cute
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