I loved this! It's a one-shot, but it's not one-shot-y, if you know what I mean. It felt complete. There were some snippets of the fic that I particularly enjoyed and want to point out.

I LOVED THIS PART!

Perhaps I should spoil the moment?” Kakashi asked innocently enough.

Naruto, who remained hidden behind several trees, gave a catty grin. “We should…but I really don’t want Sakura-chan to kick my ass next time she sees us.”

“You mean yourself. I was merely walking on the road of life again…”

“I really do hate you sometimes.”

“Don’t we all,” the 34-year-old ninja said cheerfully.

My other fave snippet was:

“Yeah, yeah…” But as Kakashi led him by the head, towering, there was no doubt in his mind that he believed in him.

And the fact that he got away without paying for his food, again.

I love how you added humor into a fic dealing with some serious emotions. Great Amazing FANTASTIC job!

Well, I've never read the whole story before, just stumbled on it from someone's favourites page. I like the suspense, though.

If you haven't fouind a beta yet, I'm willing to be your beta reader. Feel free to take a look at my profile and PM me.

Have a nice day.

Great story! This chapter made me cry during Sasuke's sleep when he was on watch. LOL

Update please! I love this already! :)

this is good

RUSTY? YOU CALL THIS RUSTY? THIS FIC IS AMAZING! HECK YEAH IT IS!This fic doesn't dissapoint me one bit, and honestly, it's really good. During the past chapters, I noticed that Sasuke was actually TALKING. I WAS SO HAPPY, because usually, when authors make him talk like that, he ends up being all OOC and stuff, but not this time. Your work is BRILLIANT. Truly envious of you work, but anyways, this, your work, is sublime.

Amazing job, really. See ya next chapter!

I have a way with words? Pahh. I'm nothing compared to you. ;) Love the story. I'll keep reading.

Oh my gosh, please continue! o.o I cannot wait to see what happens and it is fantastic so far! Really! - Definitely going on my story alert list.

I can't wait 'til next chapter. Great Job _

hey this was cool it was weird at the suden change in info and the way the charters acted. but i can understand when you haven't written in awhile so hope you update soon its really good.

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Ive just read all the Chapters so far...

i Love it...

Sasuke's a bit of a...well... Bizzotch i guess...

I still think he's awesome though.

great storyline!

Write more?

Please?

Arigatou!

Sayonara

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Love Bethi

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please do A! you're story is so good anyway, i don't mind the grammar and spelling, it's really easy to understand anyway...

Please continue this story and when it end ask people if you should do it again.

or you just can continue the story just as it was, its good

cool