Just read your story. I really liked it! Great adventure, drama, tension. A nice mix of emotions and intrigue.

loved this. i thought natalie was a little ooc near the end of the story..but other than that. awesome x 100! =]

this is good

Ah! I'm practically squealing with excitement. I love this!

this story turned out to be honestly amazing. Your spelling still could use some work, and I encrouge you to take me up on my other suggestion. Other then the little I've mentioned before, your work is good... keep trying...

"The end! What were expecting some big musical number?"

Umm...yeah...duh. Of course I want a big musical #! You completly let me down...I dont know if I can ever bring myself yo forgive you. I think I'll go off and cry now.

But besides that it was a great ending! Very well writen. I have to admit I wasnt expecting Monk to porpose (if thats even how you spell that dumb word) you completely caught you off gaurd. Well done. Great story!

Woah.

That's a very short engagement. Hahaha.
I liked this chapter lots. You wrote Monk's character very well, I could picture him doing it as I read along.

So now I have four words for you: Write another one soon!

;)

-MiSHa

E- now you know i am a sucker for ' happy ending'- yay so glad that at least in fanfiction MOnk gets the girl-- poor thing NEVER has any happiness on the show-- teehee-- anyway as ususal yo did an exceptional job-- i loved every minute of reading this and just LOVED it so much-- thanks a million for helping to keep" the monk" alive for me--
PS-- exactly WHEN are you gonna post Mr. monk and the maid"- soon huh?-- teehee- I know you have school and other obligations(but as Adrian would say-what about me? teehee-- just kidding!) hope you can post on the new story soon
you always have such GREAt ideas for stories-- i can NEVER think of anything when I think i might want to write a story-oh well- happiness is..." watching monk and reading Monk fanfiction"-- teehee

Urm...yes. I wanted a big musical number. Adrian should have sung that song he said he was singing before--something about there are chicks he's going to kiss. Damn. What was that song? The one he sang to Kroger.

Wrapped things up a little quickly, but it was all very sweet. *grin*

Yay for Monk getting the upper hand! He's a tough guy under all those phobias, and I'm glad you show it. Yay! Now I will await your next update calmly... I think...

Hello again! You really do update this frequently! Another great chapter!
I recently posted the first chapter of a sequel to "Mr. Monk Gets Sick," and I hope that you find the time to read it. It's going to have both Sharona AND Natalie. Well, on to the last chapter (that today has to offer, that is!)

How fun! Is Hitch the guy that was played by Will Smith? I've never seen that movie but the previews looked really funny! Neat crossover chapter!

*polite little cough*

'Ello? Donde esta mi new chapter of this? Quite unkind of you to leave us all hanging here. Must I set up a tent? Must I begin to stalk you? If you have time to read fics, you have time to write 'em, missy. *grin*

I've managed, using my feminine wiles, to bring your two murderers over to my side and will have to use them against you if you don't update as soon as possible. :P

Please?

Hello again! It's been so long since I've been able to sit and read fanfics! Wow, this story is really awesome, I like where it's going, and you are seemingly able to read Monk's mind perfectly at all times. I'm going to continue reading this now, because it has literally been a couple of months since I've been able to really sit and read. I'm glad I can now, because this story is really heating up.

wow what a suspenseful (thats even how you spell that dumb word) chapter. I was biting my lip almost the whole way through!

Sorry it has taken me so long to review but I have been working on my own story "Getting Closer" ...which by the way I still have yet to get a review from you on it. (hint, hint) **nudge nudge**