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| Selath 2008-05-21 ch 4,  | abuseMC never removes his helmet especially in a battle zone! AND SAMUS CAN'T HAVE HIM HE'S MINE! I mean Cortona's... *Cough*... Er only thing seriously wrong with this fanfiction so far is MC doesn't talk so much... And he's the closest thing to fearless as a human can get... I don't like Alexandra... she's trying to take Cortona's place... |
| Selath 2008-05-21 ch 3, | abuseIs Alexandra a dumb AI? By the way... By the way I want to bring up the fact that Spartan's wouldn't drink alchohal because its bad for there body so there is no way they'd drink an energy drink... he might pop a stim pack though... (Oh I just got to the part where it is revealed Alex is a dumb AI... good writing it totally fits. Why is there a Warthog at the end of the tunnel? |
| Selath 2008-05-21 ch 2, | abuseMC doesn't run thats for the regular marines a spartan would find a way to kill the enemy as spartans do discribe themselves as offensive weapons... but good so far... far better than any Samus vs John fanfic yet... |
| Jerico the savior 2008-04-18 ch 3, | abuseSo when will samus join? |
| Jerico the savior 2008-04-13 ch 4, | abuseSo? this isn't chapter 3? |
| Phoenixignition 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! But PLEASE UPDATE! ive been waiting like, forever. But anyway, so far so good! |
| Ha 2007-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha noob |
| DigiTails 2007-06-19 ch 3, | abuseInterest level decreased a little. John's a little OOC here, but eh, that can be dealt with. Until the kissing part, totally untolerable. Err...Chozo Ghosts. What happened to them? No follow I assume... Other complaint is that the chapter flew by. |
| DigiTails 2007-06-19 ch 2, | abuseDude, you have my interest. "She sounded like a civilian" exact same sentiments as Cortana. Nice. Chozo Ghosts...what are they doing there? |
| Samus 117 2007-05-10 ch 3, | abusevery nice,nothing I see wrong so far. |
| Jhon 2006-08-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseMORE MORE MORE |
| Mr.McSpiff 2006-06-15 ch 3, | abusePretty good story... only problem is that YOU AREN'T FRIKKIN UPDATING! Please update... please. |
| thirdelricbrother 2006-06-09 ch 3, | abuseKeep Writing More! |
| Knifeblade 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusePlease write more i want more |
| Ulrich Stern 2006-04-04 ch 4, | abuseSo far so good. Try to get more into one chap though. These are too short. |