Actually found this over on Pryde and Prejudice, but couldn't figure out how to review it there, so I looked it up over here.

Typical Sinister, it's all science and DNA with him, he forgets the human equation, which is why he always loses. Lance is emotional, but not stupid, so I can see him - maybe not consciously, but still - realizing that he can't beat Sinister in a fight, so he beats him another way; by taking away his victory.

Normally I'm not a fan of angst fics, but this is perhaps the best I've ever seen.

Great. I don't know a lot about XMEN, but I htought it was good. What is sinister's powers and how was he able to beat everyone. I guess the story would've made more sense with a little more background knowlege, but hey, I still liked it.

Not exactly /creepy creepy/, but it did have that effect in a way. In a GOOD way, and I adore your writing style.

Though I expected Lance would've tried to kill Sinister because although Lance may seem like the reckless type to do that, your way was much better, which showed character development, in my opinion.

Found this on LJ and followed the links to here! I'm a fan of Lance and always looking for good Lance fics. This one was great!

Creepy, but apt and very very good.

Love the story! i think you should do a sequel with a kid that the guy made from some dna that he got from Lance and Kitty but just my idea u don't have 2 i just think lotsa people would like it!

I love angsty, and character death doesn't bother me. This was an interesting, short fic... nice how Lance was the focus.

Wow, that was really good, sad but good. I'm geussing, now this is just a geuss, that since all the x-men and brotherhood are dead, there won't be a sequel? But a prequel or whatever it's called would be cool. I really liked this.

Harsh, dude. But I liked it!