SO cool! Raito is being haunted.

Hmm. Great ending. It was well paced and very accurate. I'm impressed.

Man, Raito would so go insane if L were haunting him.

I love the thought of Raito being haunted to the break of his sanity. Go L!

First, this is very in-character for Raito. Like... big time. And I was dying to find a fic like this! LxRaito-ish with L dead and haunting Raito. I'm very happy! I guess it would be too much to ask for another chapter? ^_^;;

... 'Liked it.

That was just a touch sad. I haven't read that far, just to the forth manga, but I love fan fics ability to make all thing's possible. Thank you for writing a dreamy story.

Ooh, very chilling. Loved the dialogue particularly - and L staring at the slice of cake. Well done.

OHMIGOD! That is SO SAD! *cries*

Brilliant fic, though. Absolutely brilliant.

very cute :D

yis... this is how it is, no?

It is really beautiful, very nice.
You write marvellously

excellent portrayal of how Raito would feel is Ryuuzaki was haunting him

...-sob-

Before that, really intrueging (I can't spell x.x) little fic. But now I'm sad over L's death again. -sob-

I'm gonna go angst now. >.

I really liked the ending for this is was very good. *smiles evily*

...sequal?
^^