hey, its me. i started to read this but then i noticed that u said something wont be until later. i dont like reading things until they are completed. so, im gonna wait till this is finished to read it. see, i dont like having to wait for the person to update and ive read so many things and goten to the climax and the author says, "im not gonna continue this fic" that now i only read things that are completed to aviod this. so send me an email or something when its done and i'll read it. XD

:( i loved it i jsut wished you had wrote more!

Great story I really like the Martin Ruthie Vincent triangle. Please, Please update soon!

I can't wait for more!!

great update

i liked it with Ruthie and Martin. i like it with them alone so could yoo please add them alot in the next one.

Are you ever gonna write more im curious here

great

i like this

I love it ... update soon please

Excellent start! You have a wonderful 'voice'. I have one, small, critique (and I'm really only making it because you expressed in your bio an interest in becoming a writer/english major.)

-eyes quickly looked up- body parts don't move of their own volition (except in horror stories where our bodies stop being our own). I'm know I still make this same goof myself after more years of writing than I care to admit to... and don't always catch it, because it is one of the easiest mistakes to make. Eyes darting around the room (picture that for a moment) instead of glances darting around the room... But anyway, I really like what you have written - I love the pairing of Martin and Ruthie (and I hope to all anything you break up Simon and Rose - that woman is annoying! ;P But that's just one fan's opinion.)

Cheers,
Helen

I don't understand why you must keep on using the word 'thin'. We dont need to read that these girls are thin all the time. Continue

lol! Thanks for the incouragment!! I really love the way this story began... I am happy to see that Martin and Ruthie "act" like a couple.. hehe
You have an amazing talnet! I loved how you wrote everything. Having every detail so we can picture it perfectly in our minds! Great job! I can't wait for an update!!

Good start to your story :) Cant wait for more. I really like the Martin/Ruthie fics... I hate the way the show did the season finale... lol. But, I bet Martin and Ruthie will get together next season :)

LOL. Great job, and I look forward to more!

~Babs~