No! Go back Serenity! You have to make a sequel if you haven't already. I can't stand to leave those two hanging like that. I want Serenity to come back. Your writing ability is truly amazing and I cried at the end. PLEASE make a sequel! Kage and I will just sob forever if you don't!

-Hoshi

OMG! Are you sure that you're not a professional author? Your use of words is simply captivating. I could actually FEEL Serenity's pain and Ryou's sadness. You have wonderful talent and I really think you should put it to good use. I'n not complaining about having fanfics to read though!

Gah! So cute, and a good (but empty feeling) ending. I hope they meet again one day.

You were a freshman when you wrote this?
No kidding!
Your writing isn't bad at all!

I loved every word of it!
There aren't very many Ryou x Shizuka fanfics around this site which I grieve for, but yours is a keeper. :] I already added it to my favorites.

AW! This is Jesse here, and I'm SO GLAD you finished this! I'm sorry to hear you think that the previous chapters aren't good. I use your writing quite often to get ideas on how to word something, or to inspire me, as I do with several different authors both in real life and online. If you ever get the chance, feel free to review some of my stuff, as I value your opinion. :)

In the meantime, you can add me on deviantart if you're allowed to. I post photos and stuff a lot (tabbykat35).

Keep writing! Whatever form it's in, writing is always good for you. :)

-Tabbz

Wow, it's done. Incredible. omzefgegz

Wow shocking ending/

This is a wonderful story, and you are an absolutely AMAZING writer. But I'm sitting here crying. Why kill Joey? He's my favorite character! And what's wrong with Bakura? Well, I'll read and find out! I love it!

Ah, I still think you should finish some of this. It's a lot more pro than songwriting, in my opinion. =3 Shouldn't get so down on yourself and hate your old stuff, everyone starts somewhere.

Will you be updating this or not cause if not I'm takin it off my favs list.

“Don’t worry, love. Don’t worry at all.”...WAW THATS SO AWESOMELY SWEET OF HIME HA BAKURA IS LOVLY I CANT WATE TO HER MORE...IF THER IS MORE TO CUME ^_^ YOU CAN MAIL ME IF YOU LIKE HERS MY ADRES: HEHE AWESOME STORY YOU GOT THE CHARECTERS JUST RIGHT ^_^ AW AND I FELL SO SORRY FOR THEM Q_Q OH MAN I LOVE IT HAW YOU ACTULY RITE WITH AWT CIRSING YA AND THERS NOT TO MUCH OF THAT UGLY VIOLINC ^_^ BUT OF CORE YOU HAD TO MACK JO GOW AWT IN A HARD WAY WA LOL THANK YOU SO MUCH

BEST WISHES! ^_^

Upedate this please if you're still around because it'a an awesome story, thanks, I appreciate it!

Ryou and Serenity are my favorite couple and I love your story so much that I'd give you a gold metal if I could. Great job! Please update soon!

I was just wondering when ... You're going to UPDATE. Ya know. I prefer Silentshipping but I also love Softshipping and Screamshipping. Well see ya. I hope you're going to write a lot more. Devoted Soft-Scream-Silent and so one shipper. Troubled Spirit OF Hell

Update please!