AWESOME! I mean, I really liked it. Liked the so far updated chaps of the sequel, too. Good job, and keep it up!

I loved the ending. I loved this story! I'll be back to reread it. You can count on it! Awesome job!
-D101

Whew. For a second I thought there was going to be Yaoi. I liked Hiei's answer though.
-d101

He will win!
-D101

COME ON KURAMA! YOU HAVE TO WIN! WIN DAMN IT!
-D101

WHAT THE HELL!? HE CAN'T DIE! AND WHAT THE HELL IS THAT THING THAT IS KILLING HIM! AH!
-D101

Does Karasu have a family member who would want revenge? Awesome job!
-D101

Dear Ra. He can't die! Damn it! If I feel this bad about him, I really pity his team who actually know him and are friends with him. Damn it! They have to figure out how to fix this!
-D101

Poor Kurama. I started to tear up many times while reading. I wonde if I'll be able to go to sleep tonight. Maybe I should put off reading more of this... Screw sleep this is important!
-d101

So if he dies in his dream... he could die for real? This is getting realy creepy. You're an amazing author. I've cried while reading stories and felt a small bit of fear but this mix of tears and fear is very new. Awesome job!
-D101

Dear Ra. How Kurama can put up with those nightmares is beyond me. I hope Hiei survives. Awesome job!
-D101

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! i've read it about a year ago and i had to reread it again! you are a master at story telling *goes to reread "Forever Fornever Tantei* ^_^

Aww that story was totally awesome^^

^~^ Mufufufufufu...the part where Karasu is taking advantage of Kurama is so intense!!terrifying XD
I Love It So Much! New yet addicted to it ^^
Bonus: I drew a fanart of Kurama and Botan together last year in my friendster 4th pic, hope u like it X3

Good story. You have a good plot going also. Keep it up.