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allyg1990
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseAw, so good. I liked this a lot.
stackles
2007-02-23
ch 1,
abuseo, i really liked this :D:D:D so sweet :) lol

u better update ur other stories soon!! (or at least a comedy of letters :D) lol

XD
LovableRogue
2006-08-03
ch 1,
abusewonderful story! it made me shiver lol! thanks for sharing xx
Joe D. McCillacitty
2006-05-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseand because you make a very cute kitty.
schistamacher
2006-03-14
ch 1, anon.
abusehi, thanks for being there all this time. sorry if i sounded ungrateful, but you are so deserved to be poked. You are amazing and do amazing things and i've learned a lot about myself and comic book characters. the turbulance was too much at times but i did it! I will pay attention to my pronouns and dialogue and look forward to talking/ being with you one day if you want/can.
musagirl15
2005-12-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was very cute.
Fading Background
2005-12-11
ch 1,
abuseI really need to get in the habit of reviewing...

Dis is good. I've read this one twice now and, well, it's captivating!
wayyy04
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abusehow about :
trusting touch
dangerious hope
blind step
lost in touch
who to trust
hidden secrets
whose the truth
suspicious friends, trusting stranger (get it oxymoron..lol)
ok i know they...suck , but hey! do i get a cookie!?
angelathene
2005-08-28
ch 1, anon.
abusereally good one shot. i enjoyed the dialog especially. it was very thought-provoking plus these are two of my most favorite characters and you really gave good insight into there complicated, yet sweet relationship.
Le Diable Blanc
2005-08-26
ch 1,
abuseVery good!
punkrogue
2005-08-11
ch 1,
abusetotaly loved this story, i just stumbled upon this story & i love it. too bad it's only one chapter, would have loved more. loved the whole "masks" thing, it's perfect for rogue & gambit. your such a wonderful writer! :)
Elle457
2005-07-28
ch 1,
abusethis was really quite good!
Ludi
2005-07-01
ch 1,
abuseAw, I'm quite flattered. I led you to FF from DA? Well, that's my work done for one day, neh? ;) BTW, do you have a DA account yourself? Cos if you do I can come and visit your gallery. ;)

Anyhow, onto the story. I always like these little one-shots that are heavily character-based, where it's nothing more than a battle of the wits. It's a good combination of passion, angst and humour, because we know that those two would tie in a witty comeback contest. Heh. I thought some of it didn't flow as well as it could have, but having said that, you had some beautiful ideas and allusions in there, and some lovely phrases, for instance, "Mais, maybe it’s better to hurt dan not to feel,". How true that is. I guess what I liked about this is the fact that I'm a person who wears many masks as well, and I can sympathise where these characters are coming from. In fact, I guess that's why I was always attracted to the characters in the first place - the Cajun who pretends to be someone else in order to hide from the truth of what he is; the Southern Belle who's absorbed so many people wearing masks is the only way to protect herself. It's an interesting part of their personalities to pick up on, and certainly a worthy one. Oy, now I get an inkling of why I'm so obsessed with these two!

Anyways, I'll stop analyzing before I end up ranting. Thanks for the little bit of insight into my fave couple, it was well worth the read!

~Ludi x
Lucas Logan
2005-06-08
ch 1,
abuseYou caught my attention by writing me that wonderful review of Everything Important from when I was posting as Remedy=Chill. I originally intended to submit you a review of thanks - since you dont share an e-mail address.

However... I liked the scene a lot. All I can really say about it was that it made me want to write Gambit again. And really - I can think of no higher compliment. Good writing does that to me.

It was obvious that you had a very clear vision of the scene you were creating - and that translated well.

Thanks for sharing.

-Lucas
kurodo
2005-06-03
ch 1,
abusehey. that was classic Romy fluffiness. it was great. um you reviewed my story "silent Rain" and i didnt have your adress so i am saying this now. thank you for your review. i finished the sory but i am planning on another one so plz R&R
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