A great story. Very good.

"Anakin Skywalker can hold his wife forever amongst the flowers off Naboo."

That last sentence broke and mended my heart at the same time.

I started to go though to find the best parts, but really the whole thing was wonderful. His thoughts about saying her name blew me away.

Then the theme of the story itself. Vader wants Kenobi to hate him so that Obi-Wan will kill him so he can join Padme. Wow.

Well done,
VFA

Oh wow!
That was great!

wow this certainly gives interesting insight to why Obi-Wan believed that Anakin is "dead". But all the same this tale is just heartbreaking and beautifully done thank you for sharing!

Very well done. I have not yet seen the film but have no reason not to think you have done an excellent job in translating the emotions of the man.

This is so good please update soon!

this story is beautiful - it was sad and haunting and your descriptions are incredible. I love it

Now that is a style of writing I really admire! Great reflection, great descriptions, you caught the feelings very well. I truly love your Vader. Please, write him more often!

Damn, I actually have tears in the corner of my eyes. You can now guess how much I loved it. Cheers!

Ooh, I like this very much! I haven't seen the movies or anything, but this story makes me want to! I absolutely LOVE the writing style you used here, it's so vivid and beautiful. You can totally picture what is going on (at least I could).

Good work! XD