A great story. Very good.

VERY GOOD!

I like the story it is well written. For a long time I have been reading stories and just not bothering to review, but then I stopped and thought how much I love getting reviews so now I write them as much as I can. Anyway now that I have confessed, this is a really good story. I know that you have kinda finished it but you should write more. It makes a really good prologue. Any way if you do take my advice I will be a religious follower of this story. Also your welcome. Have fun with the rest of your reviews and May the Force be with you Fan Fictioner!

WOW! I have to say that I haven't read such an interesting one-shot with such an outstanding plot in a long time. It's special because of the sad end, because of Padme's betrayel. Very, very well! More obidala, pretty please?

Mtfbwy,

Saskia

This fic was written very well. I quite liked ut even though there was something that was missing that made it stellar.

Best line:

"Without a word, he turned and went out into the desert to find his peace."

Brief enough for impact, with a perfect choice of words to convey everything that it should.

This story is very sad and heartfelt. I really like it. You did a great job!

I liked reading this a lot, good work.

-Jos*/ksc

This is very well written, I really like your style.

Love and peace

Trini