I really like it, you are good. I got some poems, you should chek them out and tell me what you think. You should keep up the asome work.

*cries heart and soul out*

Beautiful, oh my goodness. I absolutely love Leon to pieces and you captured his childlike vulnerability perfectly. I'll go continue to weep in a corner now. *sniffle*

Awesome story. Glad to see some SO2 fics still going aside my own. Nice concept, too!

shindo

Been doing so much Star Ocean 3 lately, one begins to forget the game that got me into the series. It's characters were classic, and the beach scene was very much so as well. Great job!