Not fluffy at all. Not what I call fluffy anyway. Too much heartbreak, too many promises. Better not to promise, but just to hope. There is always hope. And memory. Remus is strong enough to live on hope and memory.

Good writing, spare, like polished bones. No superfluous fat.

Wow! This is really really good!

Fluffy with an ounce of sadness is moist cotten candy.

*Sniffles* Why do they have to be doomed, HK, WHY? D:

Simple format; powerful message. Very well-done.

kawaii ! o

Bleh, I'm going to give you a reveiw now, HK!

The style is amazing! It's so captivating and intense, and yet simple! That takes some major talent to pull off. The way the way you used dialogue to convey so much is outstanding! I appreciate your knack for understanding emphasis, too. I wonder if I'm still making sense. Anyways, it was just great and wonderful in every way, and I love this story!

I hope to see more of your stories, dear, because you've got it in you to put some really great stuff on this site (and there isn't much worth a second glance here).

-Prince Snivellus D I'm so cool.

Lovely! All dialouge can often be confusing, but I get this one! And the 3rd chacater... Dumbledore?

... ... ... ... not quite sure what to say... its very interesting... but i dont quite understand it... anyway... its good though... and please dont get discouraged over my seemingly bored-ness... im a little angry, but lets not go into that... anyway...

Ja ne,

T.K. Yurikoto

Aw! So cute !