Told you you would be hearing from me again! Amazing continuation! Loved it! My heart pains for Aurora...I know how she feels, to a degree. Well, off to part 3!

please finish number 4 story I like it a lot ! iam wating.

Like I have said before I love your writting. And with this past story where you twisted both the show and your story to fit each other was awsomely done. And I am also glad that I am not the only "grown up" person here who actually pays attention to the show. Again congrats on a jobe well done and I can't wait to read Eternal Love Part 3. See ya then.

Hey I have been reading your entire series and I have enjoyed it every step of the way. An even though I have not yet finished withthe 2nd part I can't wait to read the 3rd. I also know that I am a little behind on your undateing but like I said I have enjoyed it and will continue to read as you continue to write. Can't wait for the next part. :-D

Interesting how you use the same episodes and only change minor things.

Ggr!
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You used the DUBBED version... That must be my most hated episode... It's the one where 4kids really messed with the truth.
They claimed that Pegasus's eliminator was really Kaiba's dark side. It's not true. He's a stupid shape-shifter and nothing more. How dare he impersonate Kaiba! And how dare Pegasus and him go on with the charade until the very end during the dubbed!
But... I'm being overly possessive with a fictional character. - A creation that isn’t, was never, and will never be real...

Um... Well, I guess you can tell I decided to read at least one more chapter from where I left off before. ^_^
It takes so long to read your chapters... If I read another one now, it would probably be after 1am when I’m through...

Interesting.

Hmm... Don't you think Teen would be a better rating for this? Unless you have something very bad ahead, I don't think M is the best choice. No bad words, no sex, no dying... K would even make it from what I've read so far.

Hmm...
I wouldn't have thought you'd go so much with the dubbed anime. word-per-word almost...
But I guess you wouldn't know enough about the Japanese version and the manga for it to be any other way.
I did like the blank stare you added for Kaiba. That could refer to either one, I'd say.

Here it comes...

But I still have to wait until later... so much suspense...
I wonder how much this will go into Kaiba’s part of the story... And I wonder if you'll mention the six months before Duelist Kingdom... Guess I have to wait and see.

I've read a few more chapters. ^_^
Read to chapter six and want to keep reading until I get to Kaiba and Yugi's duel... or at least something to do with the anime... But I need to stop now, ’cause I’ve been reading too long.

Knowing what's going on makes it more interesting...
As they watch the characters as the story goes on, I'm watching them from out of time... seeing how naive they are to what the future holds... Wanting to intervene during times, but can’t... actually much like your characters...

*takes Seto plushie and huggles him*

Yes, I accept your peace offering. After all, this is your fiction and not my fantasy ^_^

And about the story; I still really like it. Now to catch up on the next part.

-smile- No, it wasn't bad, it was pretty good! I'm gonna go read the next part as soon as I can... Hurry and update, please!

LoP: crappiness? i love it!
YN: nice romance parts. l like it. but there are some typos here! but i still love this!
LoP: come on! that steo/sanura part rocks! so does the atemu/aurora, the ryou/zahara...
YN: we like every part!
Both: update soon!

Aw I think I feel something between Kaiba and Sanura beginning!

Lol, awesome! And I can't wait for the Battle City ones! And it wasn't a crappy ending, I loved your quote at the end. lol.

Oh and LP, I'll give you 5 seconds to run...

Aw the end of Duellist Kingdom.

O_O Aw poor Ryou.

...hehe...Ryou and cologne... and a lot of 'aw's for Ryou and Zahara.
...but I didn't find the part of where I would kill you...theres nothing wrong in there