very...sad and sweet in a strange way,at the same time,giving me a headache,anyway good job and very poetic.

You have great choice of words. This story went smooth, to rough, then back to smooth. This is one of the best short stories I've read so far!

Wowie! Man whadda' great story!Love how ya' use da words in a poetry like type. Hope you write more stories on Shadouge like dis! Thanks for writen' it!

awesome! loved it ^^

The perfect written form of how love hurts, especially when those who you care deeply for are gone. I advise you...to keep writing! Excellent, excellent...

strange?i felt scared and hard a**!cool story mate!but i didn`t get the part when you put "and this,it did not hurt"what the
f**k is that meant to mean?

I really love the description in this. It’s so memorizing.

wierd, but wicked cool!

That...scared me. It was well-written, but I'm like in love with Shadow. Yet I read the whole thing, dangit I'm weird sometimes.

Well... that was wierd.

Wow... just wow... that was really dark and cool and brillant. Wow... great Shadouge. It was incredible. Great work.

Wow, very dark and disturbing. But very powerful too.

Dude, this is sick, twisted, and awsome! =3

Beautiful, in a twisted sort of way. I have never read a lemon like this, please write another *coughSonamycough*

brilliant, i love how you portrayed Rouge's inner torment. Also how you clearly wrote Shadow's dark side and sadistic side that i knew was there somewhere. Well guess i was lucky and decided to read in M for once. I usually don't read here because most stories get into the physical aspects. Disregarding emotions and the story entirly. Anyways, keep on writing you have a knack for it.