Beautiful and painful, which means it's a perfect addition to the NCIS universe.

Ouch! Deep- I love it. Adding rhyme definitely would've taken away from the overall piece. I like the way your brought McGee and Gibbs coping into it as well. Nice!

This is absolutely beautiful/ Belker

This was so powerfully poignant in conveying Tony's heartbreak.

Very nice, very sad.

"Gibbs is frozen over and
Tony is tired of waiting for spring."

Loved these lines. Just... wow. Nice symbolism. And you go ahead and crush all hopes with the next line,

"He doesn’t believe it’s coming anyway."

Foreboding is always a nice touch, adds to the angst, too ;)

wow! that was great!!

Very beautiful.

Too poignant. It left me feeling...too sad.

Pam

I loved it. it was so...I dunno. But my eyes are watering and! It was great, the whole thing. I liked that he realised that he couldn't really change just cause she's gone and all that...it was brillaint

ah... this is really lovely! I like the approach you've taken to Twilight. I can really see Tony cringing as he tries to eat a salad.

Oh, God, so beautiful!

This is beautiful.

Oh, and just because it doesn't rhyme doesn't make it any less poetic.

I like it, Tony trying to change, McGee, Gibbs, the sadness is there, can't express my thoughts in words right now, don't know why, normaly I'm good at that...
Really like it, I miss Kate! *cry* (just seen Twilight for the first time the other day)

wow.

So insightful -- really good! I hope we get to read many more stories from you. You are really getting into Tony -- and I'm happy to be tagging along on this journey into his soul.