Reviews for Temporal Sequence

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Rina117 2008-07-11 ch 1,	abusei loved it! the ending was beautiful..and it seemed like the real sess.
enchanted nightingale 2008-07-07 ch 26,	abuseAmazing. One of my favourite fanfics ever.
Jenn 2008-06-24 ch 26, anon.	abuseGREAT! i have no complaints with this fic. I was a little worried that Sesshoumaru would seem OOC and weaker to go along with the plot but it was perfect. Good original characters (i loved Kazuma and Maurus). A great fic and worth every minute you'll spend reading it.
link55-06 2008-06-24 ch 26,	abuseThank you for writing a fabulous story. I like how you write everyone. The ending is so beautiful.
Rem-Luva 2008-06-13 ch 26,	abusethis story is marked down as one of my favorites because it requires me to think on levels that i would normally give up on but it helps out in the long run. all i am going to say is keep doing what you are doing you are a great author.
Innusurri 2008-05-26 ch 26,	abuseI really loved this, and I got the whole clue thing. For a specific series of actions between two variables to occur, there must be a logical connection. But this connection must be sparked in a specific order of events. Causation is impossible without proper temporal sequence… Science can help us understand how choices are made. Decisions and actions are based upon more than just personal values… Every path of action will have consequences. The execution of a decision and its subsequent results will not be completely dependent upon the choice itself. External factors play a crucial role… For causation to occur a logical connection must be established, even if the relationship is only rational in theory… The logical connection is established. External factors unavoidably affect decision-making. X precedes Y. I understand this well, because x does in fact, procede y. This story took my breath away, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing it. Innusurri
borisbear 2008-05-05 ch 26,	abusewell this was just the most fulfilling satisfying inuyasha fic i have ever read. it was wonderful. well no superlative is going to do it justice. you are a really brilliant writer, and i hope you keep it up.. more fanfics or your own original stuff or anything. i am so happy to have found and read this. i know it has won a few awards but it deserves far more than it has gotten. thank you thank you thank you! ps..i was wondering.. i know this is the kind of question you go -oh isnt it obvious do i have to spell everything out?!?! but i cant work it out.. when he re-remembered her (after remembering his past and forgetting his recovery) why did he pretend he didnt know her all those times they bumped into each other on the naraku hunt?
Bethany 2008-04-05 ch 26, anon.	abuseOh... My... God. I love it. You put Sesshomaru into a perspective I've never seen before. I mean, sure, I've found other perspectives where Sesshomaru was still a good guy, but... I like this one much better. I'm soo telling Death-ducky and Hopestar1 about this.
blkntandogs 2008-03-25 ch 26, anon.	abuseThis is one of the best stories I have ever read. It is amazing, and I will read it over and over again. I'd say it's up there with Jane Austen. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. We are lucky that you did.
ViperineVampire 2008-03-23 ch 26,	abusesigh. i always cry when i read this fic...don't think you remember me but i used to review as Cult_Kagome and Sesshomaru on A Single Spark. i used to cry when i read this fic back then...and i always felt suffocated when some parts got too intense. whatever i felt then, hasn't even lessened one bit when i read it again. this is the kind of story that lives on. i will forever remember this story when i look at my prism. furthermore, i bought that prism because of this story. sigh. it's an essentially happy ending but i always feel like crying when i read it. always. i couldn't help shedding a few tears at the very last statement -"And she wanted to live in a colorful world."
ishmaranara 2008-03-12 ch 26,	abuseA good story, and a nice read. I really liked the family you gave him.
kiwi93089 2008-02-22 ch 26,	abusethis story was absolutely amazing you've really given me something to think about with the whole color spectrum concept thank you from the bottom of my heart for writting this you can truly congradulate yourself (and who says you can't learn a thing or two from fanfiction ;D ) lol Hope to read more of your work!
Kaiyou-Kitsune 2008-02-13 ch 26,	abuseWow.Just wow.Ok.I'm crying now.That was at times,but when it came together it was just so amazing.Wow.I really want to hug you right now.So beautiful.I just cant find the words to describe it.So whether it makes sense or not,I'll say the only thing that comes to mind:Thank you.
Captain Annie 2008-01-28 ch 26,	abuseFantastic job! This was wonderful!
lavender-cornell 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abusegreat!

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