Nice job.
-D101

Interesting. Midoriko reminds me a bit of Toguro when she was dying. And this story reminds me of that song by Reliant K. Who I Am Hates Who I've Been, or something like that. Anyways, nicely done.
-D101

Ok. A small bit of good. But I still feel slightly mad at the fact it took a murder for this story to happen. (Please don't take this personally, I was screaming at my computer when Kurama killed the Game Master and refused to watch the story for a little while because I was so mad.) Anyways, nicely done with the ending of the chapter.
-d101

I vote we just get rid of Yoko. That would solve the problem quite nicely. Awesome job.
-d101

... Somehow I expected a harsher punishment since it's against the law for demons to harm humans. Anyways, nicely done. I'm still hoping for something good to happen. And randomly question, is Tsuki somehow Maya?
-D101

I'm confused. Why did Kurama just randomly tell that girl that? Even if he was losing it, I doubt he would do that. Anyways, nicely done.
-D101

Ok. At first I was just going along with Yoko's evil plans because I thought some good would come from this... I'm such a baka. How can any sort of good come from this?! What the hell?! Why is this happening to him!?

Anyways, nice job on the chapter.
-d101

Dear Ra. That is creepy. I guess he can plead insanity though. Awesome job!
-D101

Living with the knowledge you are what you hate, or staying in your mind with the past version of yourself... That's actually a tough choice. Awesome job!
-D101

Ouch. So in a way Roto was right. Awesome job!
-D101

Nice.
-d101

This sorta reminds me of Ryou Bakura from 'Yugioh!'. Anyways, awesome job.
-D101

Interesting. I can see Kurama having problems with his past but this is interesting.
-D101

That was really good. Keep up the great work. I mean it. Great story!

This was a good story, except i thought this was more humor than anything else...my strange mind.