plz continue!

hello i really like your story but while reading i noticed somethings. like how Sasuke tells Sakura that he talked to her parents. but in the beginning of the story Sakura tells itachi parents they deid.

Um, to tell you the truth…my parents were killed by a rogue shinobi attack about a year ago.

Also i wanted to point out at the sudden name change from hikaru and Kaosu into the original names, maybe its an idea to change it inside the whole story so people don't notice i :)

Still like it tho :)

update soon!

GAARA IS SO KAWAII. SOO ADORABLE <3 X3 EP. Gaara is so cute.

I really liked the fact that you encorrperated Naruto into the story. I was beggining to wonder if he was ever going to show up. Oh, P.S. I really like the cliff hanger.

ITACHI AND SAKURA!
I am a little late I no but I didn't get to read this until summer on '09. I be in high school now. you made this wen I was in 6th grade.

OMG I didn't see that one coming. I guess it should be expexted. If they do get married can Itachi and Sakura have a baby girl. ME!

WHA I DON"T WANT ITACHI TO DIE

NO
ITACHI AND SAKURA MUST BE TOGTHER. THEY MUST THEY MUST THEY MUST

BONUS CHAPTER SO KAWAII EP( hikaru squeal)

Wow, that does suck. Having a spanish test just when you started, I don't recall ever having a German test when I just started German. Wow, again.

OMG Itachi is so KAWAII!

I LOVE HIM.

OMG SASUKE AND MINI-SAKURA-CHAN ARE HILARIOUS. I can't believe about Itachi's reaction to sasuke. this is probably the best chapter yet. ^^

is that it! no! good story loved it hehehe

OMG THAT COMMENT BY THIER DAD WITH HIKARU! EW, DISGUSTING. But very funny. Me liky.

oh soo very intersting, yeah
this was a really good fic!