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| Maiko-Akatsuki-Ninja 2007-01-06 ch 6,  | abuseNice! The suspense is awful. Please continue. Bye. |
| hikari and sunny 2006-04-10 ch 6, | abusewow...i re-found this story! UPDATE! |
| caitlin 2005-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abusewhen are u going to right the 8? |
| marik 2005-10-12 ch 7, anon. | abusei liked it. it was good. the beginning was good but it stared to get boring. make sure chapter 8 is better..ok? anyways i thought it was pretty good. i like how marik is OOC. i didnt like it when he started to cry though. i mean,come on, hes manly not some sissy who crys all the time! just make sure the next chapters arent boring. keep writing. |
| Ariadne Bassarid 2005-09-28 ch 1, | abuseYour story could use some serious attention. Abuse fics are all well and good, but only if you have some basic knowledge of actual anatomy. Furthermore, several of your chapters are basically script format with speechmarks, which is illegal. And lastly you have one chapter that is solely an author's note, also illegal. Both of these are criteria for your fanfiction to be removed from the site, so I suggest you rewrite before someone reports your story. |
| Piynub 2005-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuse'ello, Caddyl. I'd like to speak with you privately. Could you IM me? My AIM SN is Numbah1YuGiOhFan. |
| Ayamakoi-san 2005-09-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseThat was so BEATIFUL!! //sniffles in hanky// Here, look at this: h t t p : / / w w w . l i v e j o u r n a l . c o m / c o m m u n i t y / y g o _ b a d f i c / 7 2 9 1 7 . h t m l |
| Ryou's Kitty 2005-09-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseWhat!! NOT DA DADDY! NO!...I don't even know his dad*blink blink* UPDATE!! |
| Andyouthinkimcrazy 2005-09-17 ch 7, | abuseO_o Bakura's got his dad! Poor Ryou! ... O_O What's he going to do? |
| Raz2b 2005-09-16 ch 7, | abuseoh... I don't like it that much.. But the plot is good |
| Tracey 2005-09-14 ch 7, anon. | abuseThis is the most brillant and gripping story I have ever read!! Please wite more! I love your work and I shall seriously squash anybody who begs to differ!! CONTINUE PLEASE! ^^ |
| originallogicgurl 2005-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abusei didn't mean to flame your story. i'm sorry. thank you for reviewing my story. i really do like your work just not this story. |
| Hikari Riku 2005-08-29 ch 6, | abuseWell...this is...ahem...odd... Y. Riku: Yup, that about sums it up... |
| Inuyashaloverfan 2005-08-23 ch 6, | abuseupdate soon please. |
| Missing Fairy 2005-08-19 ch 6, | abuseGreat story! The characters are slightly OOC, but not too badly that you can't follow the story line easily enough. Love your writing style! |