I love the dialogue in this story! It's so witty, and you've got Jack's character down to a T - I got a kick out of him mentioning how much he pays his crew. He'll say anything to get Will to go along with things. :)

Wow! Loved your story, not quite as good as "No Messy Tears" and "I'll Not Abandon You" but it still is amazing! I have yet to read your other stories but don't worry I really want to read then all.

Hey...this was an awesome story! Great job! I really enjoyed reading it! It was very interesting and well written!

love from Emma

"Persuade me" ~Captain Jack Sparrow

mypiratejack

yay! the story was great
i hope there is a sequal...
well i will look for one and you better keep writting
your stories are great

mypiratejack

good she is alive
and now they are departing

mypiratejack

no blackbird!
jack...will save her!

mypiratejack

dun dun dun
it is time!!

mypiratejack

that is all up to blackbird
who knows if she will help them
well...of course she will
but the question is how?
and now she is raven turner
being a girl always has its advantages
haha!!

mypiratejack

holy crap
defeat no!
blackbird senses it so it must be that bad

mypiratejack

raven is dead
wow i want to know what that part of her was like
this just keeps getting deeper and deeper

mypiratejack

i smell muituny!

mypiratejack

wow wow and wow
that is all i can say
so they are related
jack and blackbird are in alot of trouble now

mypiratejack

so now i am interested about what blackbeard and her past and what the other side of her is besides the pirate side
i will read on

mypiratejack

more rum more rum yay!
so blackbird is her name and now ghost
he sounds like an k=interesting character
all i'm wonderin is what their voyage is on?
what did jack get when he went out to run some arrends that will couldn't go on??
how did jack and blackbird meet??
she is a girl and didn't fall for his looks??
interesting story behind that i think
i will keep reading
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hi i am mypiratejack

i love your story so far
it sounds so great
so will is repairing the cells in the jail and elizabeth is away?
many things can happen with her away...
and who is this so called pirate...what is her name??
is she Ana Maria??
i will keep reading