Very well-written and subtle; you judge all Rimmer's emotional responses perfectly.

Very nicely done! I love Rimmer angst, but I find most of the stories people do on this subject heavy handed. You have a beautifully light touch that gets the message across clear and strong.

It's a tribute to your writing skill that, even though I've never seen an entire episode of the show, I completely understood the characters by the time you were done. Very good peak under the skin, so to speak.

Angst! Yay! Lovely story, quite sad in parts but fantasticly written! Well done!

Wow! That was just wow! I can't even find the right words to describe it. So wonderfully angsty and heartbreaking. Made my eyes wet, actually. Great job!