This is sooooo sweet! I love it! I even added it to my favorites! Please write more. There seems to be a shortage of Haruka & Michiru fanfics. Keep up the good work!

deep, very deep they way you've captured Haruka's feelings.

keep up the good work!

That was nice. And probably what Haruka would have wrote in her journal. Actually, I don't think she's the type to have one... Oh wellz, anyway! That was nice! Keep it up! Ja ne!

I guess this is okay. My advice: Read over the rules of how to write Outer Semshi Fics at www.moonromance.com maybe that'll be a good help.