Reviews for Jaded Hypocrisy

Reviews For: Jaded Hypocrisy

Nefertiry Kaineferu 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseHey! stalks you I is from livejournals. I is "dollsoflace." I is insomniac and curious and I is thinking: "She must write well." I have to say-- twistedly enough-- I liked this. I'm a big Inu-Yasha fan... and this was captured pretty good. thumbs up Now I wanna pop the Inu DVD's in. Hm.
pokey 2006-09-01 ch 1,	abuseI don't usually read Kagome stories(she is hard for me to care about anymore. I mean has she grown as a character at all?) But since it had Sesshoumaru and WASN'T a romance I decided to try it out. and I lvoe it. Very interesting premist and written out wonderfully. You really right there watching her fall apart. Good characterization on Kagome, if this happened to her she probaly would fall apart.
Killshea Kavani 2006-03-05 ch 1,	abusethat is so ... creepy ...
Therese Jane 2005-07-26 ch 1,	abusethat was WONDERFUL.
Tetsuni 2005-07-16 ch 1,	abuseAww...It's so depressing.If you can go on with the story, please do so.I really want it to be a happy ending for Kagome.
Someone 2005-06-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseYeah, that was kinda depressing. But I thought it was really good -- just like all your stuff. Um... I also just wanted to say that I thought you characterized Kagome pretty well. And I can understand her problems, why she has them, and all that. It's neat. Good job! (But yeah, it was kinda weird too...)
wellduh... 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Creepy. Really.
miyl 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon.	abusewow that was really angsty. its something different for once though. but i must say i really hate this kind of endings, where you leave the story just hanging there. ah wells. generally i think it was a good piece =)
drake220 2005-05-29 ch 1,	abuseokay, my review just bounced so you might get two reviews from me but that's okay. Why? because this fic was AMAZING! i have never seen something of this depth with this plotline. sess was wonderful and kagome was just mind blowing. the wording was wonderful and the phrasing was just beyond words extraordinary! seriously, this is one of the most original fics i've read in a really long long time. everything about it was just one step to the left of normal and I am so jealous I didn't write this! give yourself a pat on the back for this one because it's a real accomplishment!
Cute and Fluffy 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow...That was beyond awesome. So dark and... damn I loved it. A very well written disturbing story just like I love them. But Sesshoumaru adoped a guy that weirdly looked liked him? And that guy had a daughter that looked exactly like Rin? I don't know, I thought it was a little to coincidental but I'll take it. To think that I might have passed that story because I saw Kagome and Sesshoumaru in the summary (and God knows I hate that pairing. Not a fan of the Kagome in fictions). I'm so glad I didn't. The power of good summaries. I didn't think that she was OOC, I mean she is unstable here and I can see her trying to cling to the past. So again, wow.
Lady Erised 2005-05-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseWonderful and breath-taking and yes, a little scary. This is the first fic that made me feel something for Kagome, and made her real for me. (I don't like her in the anime) It helped too because I work at a grocery store =) She's real and I felt for her and Kane. I think that's all I could say. Wish it was longer. Unique and breath-taking like all your stories.
Lady Bisclavret 2005-05-26 ch 1,	abuseI think I'm the first to review this story, and just let me say this: Wow. Just wow. Kagome's slow, agonizing, spiraling journey from disappoinment, to insanity, to despair was a thing of beauty, both sinister and surreal and just utterly fantastic. Not a word was wasted. Brilliant. The more romantic types would have probably have substituted Inuyasha for Sesshomaru, but it's much better this way. And, although you said in your follow up author's note that you weren't sure you handled Kagome's character right, you did really well. My only nitpick is that I don't think Kagome is exactly an attention **, which she seemed to be characterized as times here like when you compared her to a leading actress in a movie. She definitely has issues with her identity, but I don't think that being the center of attention was a part of it. However I think, given the circumstances, it still works because a lot can happen in three years following a long chain of disappointments and frustrated dreams. Heh, maybe it's because she started losing her mind right from the very start. Like I said--wow. (This review isn't much help at all, is it?)
Anna's pastime 2005-05-26 ch 1,	abuseWhat a breath of fresh air this story was! Well-written and original. Your Kag was fine, just seemed a bit tortured by the past (as intended). I really, really like your Sesshoumaru--still vicious after all these years! The confrontation between the two was terrif, and I liked seeing how it further screwed with poor Kag's mind. Can't decide if she'll feel better or worse now. Oh, wait, she'll feel worse because she almost killed a man. Poor Kag! Um, one question I had was if Kiyosato was a descendant of Sess and who (some anon. human woman?), since a reincarnation might not be around if he's still alive. Also, do you plan tos continue this a bit, or is it strictly a one-shot.
Tana 2005-05-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseI REALLY liked this story. You did a great job on it. I think it would be a even better story if you could add a little more dialogue. I can't wait to read more! -Tana-

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