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mj0621
2006-06-07
ch 3,
abuseSo great...now...to business...how bout a sequel?lol...:) seriously..
gazzer
2006-05-22
ch 3, anon.
abuseI don't normally submit reviews but when you are asking for reviews to be posted on your front lawn, I felt compelled :)
Plus it was a great story. I thought it was great that the characters were developed, not just thrown into action that was copmletely out of character. You also stayed pretty close to their actual chacter in my opinoin.
I enjoyed it immensely, keep writing and i'll keep reading!
CSICatts
2006-05-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that was amazing! You need to write more! I want to know the aftermath! lol
Jinxie
2005-12-01
ch 3, anon.
abuseI can hear them talking to each other this is so good. You have to write more in this story it's addictive!
Christieanne-Anna
2005-09-09
ch 3,
abuseis ther going to be more?
Wile
2005-09-06
ch 3,
abuseNice use of angst with this story. It seems to work well for a Mac/Stella fic anyway, and you did it quite well here. Thanks for sharing. And don't worry about being late. It's better than never.
Christieanne-Anna
2005-08-12
ch 2,
abuseThis a great fic. Could you please write more.
Sarcastic Realist
2005-08-01
ch 2,
abuseOMG i'm so hooked! PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE update SOON!
SGBS4L
2005-08-01
ch 2,
abuseGreat chapter and update soon plz. PS: I love to see stella/Mac fics
Cassie
2005-08-01
ch 2, anon.
abuseExcellent chapters, can we expect more??
The Madhatter2
2005-07-31
ch 2,
abusePlease tell me this will continue. I love it. Love the relationship angst. It happens to some of the best... and it's just wonderful. Keep it up! :D
thousand-miles
2005-07-31
ch 2,
abuseSorry to hear about your loss. I hope things will get better for you.

I am very happy to see this one continued. I feel for Stella. Why is Mac being so stubborn. He wants to talk and then he stops talking. He needed to push her little, I think. Great work! It's always good to see M/S fanfic!
fruitbat00
2005-07-31
ch 2,
abuseOMG youve done it again left me hangin on the edge of the cliff along with the rest of your readers.. I love this, so heartbreaking for both of them. You have to fix this you cant leave them like that.
sidleidol03
2005-06-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey, that was really good! You should try a sequal or a second chapter. I would definately review again!
Kathmak
2005-05-27
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written! I'll be looking forward to the follow-up. (And by the way, I thought Mac was a little too ** Danny as well. I'm glad Mac felt bad about it, lol.)
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