aw I really likes it, keep up the good work. Laterz.

This was a very sweet fic. I liked it a lot. even though I am not a huge fan of T/A's, it is still fun to read different pairings once in while. Great job, I applaud you and I can't wait 'til that sequel is out!

You win some, you lose some, and this fic definitely won:-)

Hey,who ever Holy Meat is,I got news for

you,Ayeka gets Tenchi!

Haha!Kiss my ass!

AT 4 Ever!All the way!

You got the personalities of Ayeka and Ryoko pretty well, I think you went somewhere else with Tenchi's! () And I am slightly embarressed of the RT fans below. I am a RT fan, but I respect those who have a different opinon on who should be Tenchi's. You have quite a bit of talent, but I suggest a bit more research with some of the character's ways of doing things, but overall, it was Great! I enjoyed it very much!

Ryoko's Daughter

PS: RT forever...HeeHee!

How sweet! a/t 4-eva!

sweet, i love a/t parings! that was a sweet story, do you think that'll happen, i hope so! i think ayeka deserves tenchi! and i think she draws pictures in the snow like that, i wonder if he has seen them!

Wow Tenchi can be very forward!

alright finally a tenchi and ayeka fic sighes sorry i love this couple. please continue this story please *on hands and knees begging* please lol well i hope you do ja ne

MORE! make more chapters this is so cute! i love AT fics!



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thats so sweet ! good story! you should consider making another chapter

awwwwwww...in the snow...how sweet! _

Great _ (sings- One heart. One soul. All we need is one one ONE VISION!

Weak. The "romance" was way too abrupt. If you're going to have Tenchi choose a girl (whoever it might be), it shouldn't just be sudden & without explanation like this.

And RYOKO build the onsen, not Washu. It was first seen in episode 5. Washu doesn't show up until episode 6. Thus, Washu couldn't have possibly built it.

Are you gonna add another chapter? I like Temchi and Ayeka romance.