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| Werid-O-Ville 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseheheh awh so funny keep up the good work |
| Umbra the Dark 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseluv tha humour in tha story, n i hope u keep up tha good work n update soon. u mite wanna change ur story format from the script format 2 a story format cuz if ff finds out, they can remove ur story 4 some reason... |
| lauhall 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was so funny, I kep picture them during teh entire story and made me laugh so hard. Great story, and very funny. |
| Kallie 2005-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseHOLY COW! That was hilarious!! I now have this mental image of all of those things. haha :) wow. You're a really good writer! |
| Seriously Sarcastic 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseok so baisicle these r the #'s that im lil sis does #10 omg! that totally true! the younger ones never get blamed for anything! #7 lol :rotlf: that part craked me up! lol that would b so funny to watch! imain a 23 yr old doing that. lol :-P i can just c myself in 9 years doing the exact same thing . . . lol #5 OMG! that also totally true! my sisters ALWAYS (and i mean akways as in every single day) steal ALL my stuff! #4 ok well at least syd's sister actually asks if she can borrow things . . . my sisters just take things #2 omg my sister (the older of my younger sisters) will ask the STUPIDEST questions. like 'what would happen if that plais crashd? *pionts up to a plain in the sky* and i would b like 'well most likely the ppl in there would die or get hert OBVIOUSLY' lol ok so Nadia is so like my sister. they're going to LA! yay!! *~Kimmi~* |
| bao1020 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseGood story! Make more! |
| wolf-archer 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseConfusing, yet cute. Great start and lov the fact that Sloane is their uncle. up date soon!:) |
| sweetsouthernbell 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseHeeza! I'm not really sure that's even a word, it's barely pronouncable but whatever. That is not the point, okay? The point is that I like to say it. Anywho... I like it so far. I was a little confused as to what the general plot of the story was until the very end but I get it now. Tres cool! I like your grammer and spelling. Almost none, maybe two or three and that's if I'm being really picky. So yeah, props to you for that one. *cannot stand bad grammer and spelling and has the overpowering need to fix it all* I think I'm a grammer Nazi... how weird is that? Very I say. I'm rambling... like a lot. But here's the jist. Me like story. Me want more. If you ever need someone to bounce ideas off of or beta for you, call me or... email me or... whatever. You get the idea. ~Melanie |
| Number47 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseHey! Great start for your first fic... You need spell check, girl. |
| Aliaschickita47 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseHA! I liked that! it was really cool. I guess you don't like nadia! or jack. you killed him off! I can't belive you did that! I want spy daddy. *tear* Review, please! |