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peppymint
2008-02-15
ch 3,
abuseSniff, I love this story but you haven't updated in forever. Please continue it. It is way to good to be abandoned.
Hidari
2007-12-06
ch 3,
abuseThis is really good. A novel way of looking at the Battosai, a different perspective, ne? Nice. Too bad it's been so long since you've updated. ^_^
swordbunny4486
2007-04-03
ch 3,
abuseinteresting and good
korrd
2006-05-30
ch 3,
abuseGood fic. Shouldn't Tomoe be in the PBKB? I mean even if it was accidental she was still killed by Kenshin. Update soon.
nii-chi
2006-02-26
ch 3, anon.
abuseHello! woot . i love ur stories.
Crazy Hyper Lady
2006-01-15
ch 3,
abuseHAHA! This rocked! Luved it!
Lady of Spring Rain
2006-01-12
ch 3,
abuseGood chapter. Update soon!
Adrienne
2005-12-28
ch 3, anon.
abuseHey cool, this is an iteresting look on the PBKB, and on a different character other than Kenshin. Very nicely done!
Kanzen ne Tsuki
2005-12-01
ch 3,
abuseYeech! Having Battousai/Kenshin kill Yukio was a harsh thing for his relationship with Chiaki. How sad. Yet, the exchange between Yukio and Kaito was priceless. I couldn't help but giggle. Him petting his own head was horrible and humerous at the same time. Ironically, my massive cat was laying in my lap at that moment and I was stroking him. It was a tad chilling. LOLOL

I don't know why you're worried. It was an excellent chapter. The next one is going to be... awful. How is Chiaki going to react know her beloved okouko killed her fiance'? Heartache is a terrible promise here.

Off to catch up on 'Like FAther, Like Son'.

What is a 'daisho'. I couldn't find it in my translation index or my japanese dictionary. The closest thing I came up with was a 'scribe', and that doesn't make sense. I found a vague reference to 'daisho' as a pair of swords in another translation index. This makes sense. Is that what you mean? Probably. :) Excellent word. Think I might use it myself.

BTW... Thank you for putting 'The Red Death' in your C2. I'm honored and humbled. Arigato.

Tsuki-san
Sailor-Earth13
2005-11-27
ch 3,
abuseI think you did a very good job. I like your other characters. Please post the next chapter soon.
Umeko
2005-11-11
ch 3, anon.
abuseAw, Chiaki really reminds me of Tomoe in a way. She's always looking out for Kenshin's welfare. It's really ironic they went to buy a present for Yukio (who happens to have met his end by Battousai's blade). Kaito is such an ahou. That free food remark was so silly (GRin).

Will Nagakura confront Kenshin? Woohoo! Bloody duel in the back alley! In the manga, Kenshin did mention he fought with Captains 1,2 & 3 and came out in a draw in all 3 duels.

What will Yukio's reaction be if he ever finds out about Chiaki's little 'bro'?

Waiting eagerly for the next installment.
Kristy-chan
2005-11-10
ch 3,
abusegodd job. update soon
zephyr
2005-11-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseAH! I can't believe you just left it there! The suspense! You've gotta get another chapter out as soon as you can! Please!
Shirou Shinjin
2005-11-10
ch 3,
abuseWai for update! It's been... HOW long since you updated this one?

(sigh) This is probably the worst part of a story... when you know that horrible thing waiting just around the corner for the poor, unsuspecting characters... poor Chiaki... oh yeah, and Yukio for the whole dying thing.

But I'm definetly worried about Kenshin. Like Kaito said in what must be the singular time he's ever been perceptive; it's like a warped version of Tomoe and Akira all over again. Methinks this isn't going to go down well with Kenshin :(

Anyway, another good chappy. Hope LFLS picks up for you... AJfS is being difficult at the moment, too. So hard to decide what to do...
skenshingumi
2005-11-10
ch 3,
abuseWhat a sad twist of fate. Chiaki and Jiro are also sympathetic characters but I would think this could be about the last straw for Kenshin. I look forward to things to come.
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