Words can't express how much I love this story. The chapters were short and easy to read, and none of your scenes were drawn-out and melodramatic. The characters were also very well-developed. The only problem that I have with this is Link's proposal. I felt like it was a bit out of place and impromptu. Even so, this story has earned a place in my favorites.

I LOVE YOU. MARRY ME. NOW. D:

But really, I loved your story!

Everything was perfect :)

I think I'm going to skip homework tonight and read Murky Waters instead.

LOVED the story. Can't wait until I start reading the sequel. Link is very different in this fic. I like...!

Great story you are a really talented writer!

THIS WAS SWEET...AWSOME I LOVE IT I'M SO READING THE SEQUEL HEHEHEHEHE _

WOW!, really good story here!

Wow, amazing... I don't really like L/Z, but this was totally awesome...I am mind-blown. Good job!

Vince

AH WHATS GUNNA HAPPEN?1? well lucky for me you already completed the whole thing, so i will just move on to the next chapter! u are an amazing writer by the way!

i hope its zelda! well like i hope that zelda will be SAVED, not die in the freezing cold water. it reminds me of titanic.. ok well i will keep reading! good chapter!

aw link is evil! i wonder what will happen next! so far i love the idea so i shall keep reading further!

Aws how sad. Shiek died.

Well well... you manage to finish it.

I wish I could say the same for mine, but Chapter 16 has taken me a few months, and it's still not up. Stupid 7 AP class schedule...

Well, someone has agreed to do a movie over mine, so it's all good. That means that I have to work on it, though.

But enough about my story; this review is for yours. Although the couple moved faster than I would have recommended were they my friends, I feel assured that it will all work out for the best. And I think that the sequel will be better; you've more experience writing, and you have a good story set up already. I wish you the best of luck.

way to cliff hang me! gr get that sequel up you! . tee-hee good story .

leni

i like it now ill read the sequel yay

wonderful! though I must admit that I was hoping for a somewhat better ebding...oh well. great job! cant wait for the sequal!