Wow...that was...beautiful. Your words flow incredibly - just a lovely fiction =D
//Hm...I'm betting that this is Bakura and Ryou. I and my hikari are avid Tendershippers, so that's what we think.\\

Meep! very twisted but very wonderful XD I love the flow and the style and the narration! Much creepy and awesomeness.

Hm... I'm thinking of 'Kura and Ryou for this one, I believe. Besides, wouldn't Mariku killing Malik kind of count as... suicide? XD
Well, at any rate, this was gorgeously written; you put quite a bit of (rather insane) emotion into such a short space, and I love how you were able to do that.

Wow! Intense! Good, but sad. Thanks.

>.< I LOVE IT! I LOVE ALL ANGST! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! -pants- uha... I have had too much sugar...

-huggles- this is great! and sinse I review so rarely, be proud! ^^

Oh, could be dead, it works quite nicely there... or has locked himself in the shadow realm until he finds a way to banish his yami... Or I dunno. Interesting read, either way.

Ooh. That was unbelievably pretty and hypnotic. I choose to believe neither. I almost like it when sad things are left to hang in the air.

Goodbye and Goodluck.

O strange pretty angst fic. Reminds me of Baku and Ryou, I will say it is. And I will say the light is sleeping, perhaps forever, but still sleeping. Very nice portrayal in the twisted mind of the dark and a nicely painted image w/ your words. Awesome story, see ya around. ^_~

Ouch...reminds me of Ryou AND Bakura.

Hi it's me. Just wanted to say I love this stoy again..ya.. bye! =D

I know!The Light is just sleeping...for eternity.=/(in denial-_-)

OK now I now you said to could be any Light and Dark but to me it sounds way to much like Bakura and Ryou. I also think that the light is dead. I like it. Keep it up for any and all other stories or are or might be writting.

Sad, dark, but cool that's all i can say about it! See ya!

...wow that was well it made me really sad and... I dunno wow... hmm thats all I can say... there is nothing I can say its just so sad and I believe that he is dead cause he said hes not breathing anymore, but I guess some people just wont want a yami to kill his lightside so they will believe him sleeping... ok I just babled about nothing and I am still doing it... anyways cant wait to read more of your work.