A great story. Very good.

really good story when will you update again??

Wonderful story.

Another beatifully sad story, and I love the way you've explained it. Keep up the good work.

L.S.

Meh! *bursts into tears* so sad...yet so cleverly composed!! well done! ive seen MANY prelogues to jacks story..this is one of the most connecting! it actualyl makes sense! lol...i luv it. i actually think the stacatto style of writing you did here was very effective--it really hit you hard in the face. thats a good way to write prologues maybe..i guess..lol.
luv ya jen

Nice oneshot. You do have to feel sorry for Jack after reading this. I liked this version of Jack growing up (well, sort of growing up). Anyway, keep up the good work! Oh! Did you get my e-mail?

yay* I read it so good so sad also I love it...I so love Story's like that it's sad but ye keep reading it because ye want to known what happend and that's good

OOH MOTIFFS! i love motiffs. i really love this little clip- it's awesome to see little captain jack feeling so much for his mama! (for a bit) *giggle* i wonder if he was oedipal? j/k wonderful and now i'm off to start the unicorn!

Oh, that was sweet! I liked it! BTW, I am the person who wrote "FairyTales That Coat the True Meaning of Apples", since you were wondering. I deleted it however, because I didn't know where to go with it.

wow anna this is really cute! im glad to find an update here! lol. yer beginning for jack is really differ from mine but is still really good. lol. i guess we all hav differ fantasies about how he started out.
luvs, jenna
cant wait to see you in WA! i have vowed it to my heart! and my parents already know! and i even told my best friend...okay, lets just get this straight- ive pretty much convinced myself that we're going to see each other and that we WILL! lol. luv ya

Cool, cool, i like it. It gave me a better understanding of him, even though i know him quite well from you! LOL!

OMG that was so sad. i loved it but it was so sad. poor jack *starts to cry* i loved it.