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| Eden Eyes 2005-08-01 ch 1, | abuseLOVED IT! |
| amido-black 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseHa ha, only Grissom would hear the line ‘Dead skin on trial’ and link it to epithelials! Poor Gris, a Green Day concert just doesn’t seem to be a setting that he’d enjoy. I cam for the title but stayed for the story; it was great, a joy to read! |
| lamadrina19 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was so funny! Great use of lines! |
| AzureHart 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat use of the Improv lines! Lindsey's comment about being 'an old lady' at 35 sounded just like something my 13-year-old cousin would say. Good job! |