WHAt?? was this during Episode VI or EU?? TELL ME!!

Another great story. You've got a good grasp on all the characters. I was especially impressed by Han because I think he's a bit difficult to get right. The Maelstrom has a point, Luke shouldn't be quite as clueless as you have him here, however, he didn't know the entire story. Obi-Wan told him that Vader betrayed the Jedi and helped the Empire hunt them down. But here, Han is telling him the story from a political angle with more details. And he knew that Obi-Wan and his father had been Jedi knights who fought in the war, but he didn't know they had been famous or that someone like Han would know about them. Which was a great idea by the way. I hadn't really considered it, but it makes sense for him to know about all that stuff. So, uh. Good job. Another great read.

You wrote Han's character so well- you two must ahve talked.

cool. i hope you talk more about Anakin and Obi-Wan.and Mace and Yoda.

You've made one crucial mistake in your story. Ben had mentioned all of this to Luke. Remember? When he told Luke about Jedi Knights and handed him Anakin's old lightsaber?
So uh... this wouldn't have happened.

That was a nice little piece! I like how you touch the events in the past without getting lost in it, you keep to the present.

This is really good idea for a story and extremely well executed. Will you be writing more cos it rocks! Perhaps the twins could find out more about their parents or the fall of the rebuplic and the fate of the Jedi? Really cool chapter!