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| Buffy319 2006-08-28 ch 10, | abuseI loved the story all the way up until the ending. I HATED IT! Simon should never have died. |
| qblisa 2006-06-28 ch 10, | abuseI liked the way Simon's plan played out. I'm glad there were little unexpected twists here and there. Nicely written and true to the Alias episode format. I can't believe Sark is dead... That sux! Nice way to end the story, with Simon's life on the line and the CIA almost trusting Sydney again. Perfect. I really enjoyed your story and hope youwrite a Sarkney next time. Cheers, Lisa :) |
| phi4858 2006-06-28 ch 10, | abuseI'm not sure what end I was expecting, not a happily ever after, that's sure. I was torn how I wanted to see it end. I'm one of those Sarkneys and so I'm sad Sark is dead but in your well written and fascinating story it had to happen like it did. Thank you. It's good to see you finishing your fic even after this time. Will you write something else? |
| explodeychik 2006-06-27 ch 10, | abuseOh, that was great. I just love love love Simon/Julia fics. Thanks :) |
| qblisa 2006-05-13 ch 8, | abuseOh... He really loves her :) I am really enjoying your story. Each new chapter reveals something new and important about the plot and characters. I could read your writing all day... Its beautiful. I'm Sarkney to the core and this is the first none Sarkney that I have liked. Well done. Lisa :) Waiting patiently for your next chapter. |
| phi4858 2006-05-02 ch 7, | abuseI enjoy reading this. Of course I want to know what are Sydney's plans (getting back the plutonium I think) and Sark's resp. Simon's. |
| qblisa 2006-05-01 ch 7, | abuseSo excited... Sark is in the story!! hehe I am really enjoying your story! Thank you! Can't wait to find out why Simon feels so guilty (what has Sark ordered him to do?!?) What is Syd going to say? Please help me out by posting an update soon! Lisa :) |
| sarah 2006-04-30 ch 7, anon. | abuseomg i cant wait to see what happens next! i am so suked in, i am supposedly suppose to be doing my homework but i couldnt stop reading |
| Beauty in my Breakdown 2006-04-30 ch 7, | abusei really liked this chapter...but what had sark set simon out to do? i guess i'll just have to find out NEXT CHAPTER! UPDATES QUICKLY! PLEASE! |
| qblisa 2006-04-26 ch 6, | abuseThank you, thank you, thank you... for making Sydney/Julia feel guilty... It's just her! She is 'good'. Tranquilizer guns - great detail!! I can't wait to find out what Simon has planned. Oh and by the way... thanks for mentioning Sark :) I am more than happy to wait for you to write the LONG version of this story. I understand life gets busy... so take your time (I'll probably go insane waiting, but), I totally understand and will be waiting. Can't wait for your next update. Lisa :) |
| phi4858 2006-04-24 ch 6, | abuseFine to let us choose. I prefer to have the longer version of events until your end. I'm able to feel Sydney's conflicted thoughts like Simon is feeling the change if he isn't able to know exactly what is changing. What does he know? What are the plans? What is he asked to do? I'm sure Sydney wouldn't agree. |
| phi4858 2006-04-22 ch 5, | abuseYour writing is very interesting. You describe the feelings of both of them impressive. Until your next update |
| Beauty in my Breakdown 2006-04-21 ch 5, | abusei liked this one and i HOPE she goes back to being julia that would be awesome! update QUICKLY!! |
| qblisa 2006-04-21 ch 5, | abuseNice... So Simon really loves Julia. But can he love Sydney? Sydney has a conscience and there's no way around it... she couldn't go back to being Julia even if she wanted to (although it would be easier for her) she would be haunted by guilt. I hope she doesn't take the easy way out. Obviously, the events that have passed will have changed her, but hopefully not too much. I like 'good' Sydney, with a 'bad' girl streak. I am so happy you are updateing this story on a regular basis now :) Cheers ;) |
| phi4858 2006-04-17 ch 4, | abuseWhy aren't interested in Alias anymore? I myself suppose if I would be a writer I wanted to finish a fic. When reading I love the different ideas and want to read the whole story until the end. But I'm none. Fine you updated after this long time. I hope you'll update more. |