Hey!don't leave this as a oneshot continue it to at least twoshot story okay? the next chapter should take place after ruby moon gets back from england!

Are you going to write a sequel? That would be nice. Awesome job!!
-Mg3007

nice one

Aww, that was such a kawaii story~! x3 Lol. Especially the ending. *sigh* It`s so dreamy to imagine Yue feel embarrassed, y`know...*is fangirling*

Anyway, it was a great plot. Well-written, too. And cute~!

I`m hoping to see more stories *ahemYuexRuby* next time. See you~ :3

Please oh please make a sequel! I really loved this story!

VERY VERY SWEET. DO WRITE ANOTHER ONE .PLEASE!

I jus love ur story! What would i give to write as well as you. Yue is so sweet and its nice that u didn't go OOC. Ciao LC...

aww!! that's so sweet, i love it!!

This is interesting, and probably one of the better Yue/Ruby fics out there.

A few points; if you're worried about your spelling and grammar, I suggest trying to find a beta. Also, don't use &; type out 'and', it looks much better.

A note on characterization; it's fairly good, but I think that Yue was too informal in the story. He's very controlled in canon except when provoked, and very deliberate. He probably would not use slang, if he even knew any modern slang. I don't think he'd use contractions, either. Also, I think he'd call him Spinel, not Suppi; he tends to be overly formal, and nicknames don't suit him.

Second, about Ruby Moon, she doesn't use honorifics with Eriol. It's a small thing, and really subtle, but it's a good characterization point.

Some things I really liked were your acknowledgement of the past, particularly Yue's feelings for Clow, and the barriers between Yue and Ruby. They were present, but not overdone. Kudos on remembering Kaho; you probably wouldn't believe how many people leave her out!

Overall, this fic is enjoyable, but you can make it better. Please take this into account, and work to be a better writer. Good luck!

Aw. Please Tell me your going to write more!! Yue and Ruby awesomeness Update soon if your gonna contuine.

Aw, it was so pretty/ YueRuby, such a cute little couple. ^_^