Wow. This was beautiful and painful and so very, very Jiraiya.

Aww that was so cute and sad! It was so beautiful! Great job!

I love this, I really, really love this. I so sad, heartbreaking and just so absolutely wonderfull!
Well done!

So beautiful and sad.

wow. that was beautiful.

ARGH!

heart-wrending. T_T

well written jiraya x tsunade angst always gets me so bad. argh!

that last line was brilliant.

Great fic of Jiraiya. Poor him. Love the ending, it's perfect.

i absolutely loved this story! poor Jiraiya, i normally love him anyway, but this drabble almost broke my heart. i really enjoy this pairing, but it's so sad - beautifully tragic.

Wow...beautiful writing. I believe you portray their relationship exceptionally well. ^_^ Good job!

Shoot I like Jiraya and this is a great fic.

Wow! You're a great writer and I love how you portray Jiraiya to be more than just an old perverted man. I hope you make a one shot for Tsunade as well.

aww...poor Ero-sannin...and baa-san...

*dies*

Autopsy report: Suffocation. Apperently died of laughter.
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This was just SO, SO awesome! You are obviously a master. *bows deeply*

Very good. I've read several introspective fics about Jiraiya, but this one is especially appealing. Methinks it is because you portray Jiraiya as being deeper than nails can dig.

Love the [second-to?] last line.