I like that

That was hot without being overly descriptive. Very well done.

-Angel

Aw dear Mugen, cause you can't really say poor Mugun. Cause its just as much poor Jin then. But their so intertwined and isolated and confused and aimless that they damage each other just as much as they help and gain from the other(not those two, Fuu included of course). Enjoyable angst piece.

good fic

incredible writing! It's extremly eloquant and the choice of vocabulary makes such a short piece so full of emotion. It inspires me to start writing again!

it looks like you havent done it in a while, looks as though youre not even around any longer but you should think about updating this.
its good.

Unbelievable command of imagery and character. You took the characters somewhere that the series only tempted us with, but made it so impossibly believable, and real, and... wow. This fic is a keeper. I hope to read more from you.

Short, playfully raunchy and a smooth read. A well executed fun read. Thanks!

Damn, that's the way to write an awesome story.

Oh my god that was hott.

THAT IS NASTY! JIN IS NOT I REPEAT NOT!!

I love your style and the words you use...
like a firefly in amber...

Oi!
Very nice. I really like your writing style, it's mature. There aren't very many good Samurai Champloo fanfics out there yet, probably because the US started airing it only recently. I can't believe there's only two seasons (26 episodes)...it's so aggravating. Anyways, keep up the good work, but could you possibly make the chapters a little bit longer? Onegai?

Matsuko

ps-Jin is the best character, I think. I have a sophomoric infatuation with him right now...

awesome
Please update soon

I just recently started into Samurai Champloo and this was my first fic I stumbled across. This was written really well chapter one was kind of eh but chapter two is amazing. I love the way you stated the beginning with reflection of mirror and her eyes very sweet poetic. Mugen is watching though..ah twisting relationships sounds interesting.