Bitter sake. Is there any other type? lol Love the idea of taking Kenshin's experiences though you should have gone more into depth with them. This chapter felt like a tease.

I liked the ending. I thought you did a good job on the tone and voice of Battousai. I think though that you might have meant sermonizing not simonizing in your reference to Hiko and sake.

Very nice! You're very good at these introspective one-shots...

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