It was kinda funny and corny at same time, ok story. I think it broke the 4th wall too many times though.

Wow, that was probably the worst summary EVER!! Do you know how hard it is for people to open up a story and read it, when a character is actually named Mary Sue?

This is brilliant. Gotta love the Rockets. (It's the same right-hand grunt in EVERY fic by a Suthor. He's HIRED! He has authority over Rocket Admins! OMG!)

Uses for morphs, by The Abyss Dragon (Me) for any Team:
1: slave army.
2: freak shows and betting.
3: Create attractive Eeveelutions, Ninetales, Gardevoir, Lopunny, Jynx, Nidoqueen etc and sell them for M rated purposes.
4: Use them as 'rare Pokemon' in the Rocket game corner in Celadon.

And Raichumorphs? Nah, rubbish. Thunder is part Rai', part Jolteon, part human. Result: Tall Raichu with spiky neck fur. Original.

Logic is so absent! WAH!! No... Ahem. Much torturing of disobedient morphs FTW.

OMG lol.
Bwahahah!
THIS is the reason why I wrote Fire Incarnate. (Ad alert!)
For originality, try morphing Pokemon into morphs. So much cheaper and legal for the Rockets.

Nice story! The cliches are all in there. This story made me feel good about myself, because no plexiglass test tubes or Team Rocket for me! I have a giant...glowy...head...i don't feel good anymore...Anyways, if you want to read my story, search The 17.

Yeah. My will folded.

^^;

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Not a human or Pokémon was stirring, not even a guard, a night watchman, or even a late night hiker wondering what on earth that strange, big building with the not so hidden dirt road leading to it was.
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Lolz. And -that- is why, three years ago, I decided to make the TR hideout underground.

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(Rachel blinks, seeming rather baffled by Laura's amazing ability to talk in emoticons, but shrugs it off. It was probably just one of her new special powers, rather than an excuse for lazy writing...)
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Emoticon talk is often parodied in Parodies. But -that- having a character acknowledge it rather than the author, is something new. *cookie again.* You do sure know when to use the right type of humor.

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Rachel, being her usual clumsy self, however, soon ran right into a oddly placed trash can, knocking it over with a crash.)
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"Oddly placed trash can" ftw.

Most TR-captured fic have hotel room cells? oO That's just...wow. Glad I've never seen that. xP

And yet again, I am stunned. But this time I really have to go, so I'll read the last chappie later! Ciao!

~Chibi~

O.M.F.G. ... EVEN MORE. O_O

This is... this is... word fail me.

Damn, I wish I could use Quote tages like a forum. ><

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And Mary Sue says wickedly, "You’re Team Rocket. Even if Giovanni is the only one who did anything, I will still unreasonably hate every last grunt!"
Sputters the Rocket Grunt, "Now, now, that would be completely unfair...now, what if there was a grunt who was only a Rocket because they needed the money, and would be your special friend and help you escape? There are always some of those in these stories..."
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YES. *_* Yes, yes, yes. Man, I can't stand it when people do that! You hit the nail on the head right there, something I've been trying to do in my fic, but since yours is a parody, it has the added bonus of being fecking hilarious too. *cookie*

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(To prove her point, she makes a thunderbolt appear in the air. A PINK thunderbolt. That makes a smell like strawberries. And inflicts triple the damage of an ordinary Raichu's Thunderbolt. And chops, stirs, purees and can fold napkins into little origami swans.)
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XD x 8-on-side Insanely. Brilliant.

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We must escape, surely...the morphs always do, you know, it says right here in 'Pokémorph Stories - a History' by Wooldoor Sockbat, Phd.!"
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Bwahahaha. xD


Dunno ho to coment on the argument that parents would be likely to reject their morphed kids--d'you really think so? I dunno, you're right in that there's never any consequences though. Lol and the free special classes. x3

Garr...I really should go to sleep now. I'll read the next chapter tomorrow...unless my will folds and I read it right now instead.

Cheers!

~Chibi~

O.M.F.G.

I don't know if you were around SPPf, oh say, two years back, but that was the golden age of parodies. They were everywhere, even non-parody-type writers were doing them: some good, some bad, some brilliant (Breezy's "an leter off compaint" and Spazzikarp's "Haha n00b" come to mind).

Being a parody connoisseur of sorts, I must say that yours is brilliant. And I've only read the first chapter.

Good God, that was hilarious. xD

Just the perfect around of wry 3rd person sarcasm and 4th wall breaking, not to mention comments of coincidence, main character plot dominance, plot tool characters, and my favorite, Team Rocket handling (being a TR fic writer myself). Plus them all being clueless. xD But in the bad sort of way where the reader knows obvious things they don't (had to amend the statement of clueless characters being a bad thing, lol.)

I love Floofykins, along with the complete illogical-ness of her knowing anything about TR (the Pokéspeech vs human comment was unecessary, but since Pokéspeech is handled poorly enough by a lot authors who use it, the comment works. Plus I daresay I need not reignite the infamous Pokémon inteligence debates, no?) ^^;

You know, you have a point in that Pokemorphs do seem to be a rampant cliché abused by most fic writers. It's one of those things perceived as cliché I've always wanted to shred and rework in my fic, but never was able to.

~Chibi~

Well, if nothing else, this was enlightening. Now I'm going to have to try my hand at a pokemorph fic. Very amusing to read, I just wish people would take the advice.

What happened to Sunrise? >:(

Anyway, this was silly!

Your wonderfully absurd title has sent me into a fit of giggles. =D

Update soon!
I decided on Persian for my Morph. Check out my story! It's stuck with the rather unorigianal name of 'Project Morph', until I can think of a better one. XD
Yay for the Mary-Sue song!

You're welcome. Of course, it's easy for a human-turned-into-a-super-powered-robot-when-the-human-was-at-the-point-of-death to blow up a jail-that-has-a-fic-writer-who-was-unjustly-jailed so that said fanfic author can continue writing. Anyway, chapter is good. The reason why the Pokémorphs are faster is because the Pokémon have high "speed" statistics, so the morphs have their human speed, PLUS the speed of their LV100 Pokémon that the DNA samples were from. That's not a criticism, it's a note. So please update, because I need to find out the rest of the rules! This is a very good fic!

Yay! Cool story! BWAHAHAHA!
I'm writeing a Morph story, I'll admit, but the main charrie is a newbie Rocket Grunt who volunteers for the Morphing. I'm not sure if she'll be a Persian Morph or a Seviper Morph, though. Perhaps a Dragonair Morph!