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tornadoblake2009
2009-10-03 . chapter 2
cool
tornadoblake2009
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
hey great chapter
Gabriel99
2009-06-19 . chapter 20
I know its been 2 years so its unlikely that you're going to update, but I just wanted to say I how much I really have enjoyed this fic. Its so original, & written so well, & I can't help but hope that you'll update sometime - though please don't consider this nagging! I know real life makes it hard. Its just that I've read lots of fics but what you've done with Anakin is so inspired that I couldn't stop reading :) Every chapter was brilliant.
So I really just want to say thanks for sharing, and good luck with everything :) Thanks again!
Tears Falling Freely
2009-04-25 . chapter 20
My first thought on Anakin's 'Han was never going to let him live this down' was: Not as long as you both may live.

I have just finished reading all twenty chapters and at first I was a little wary about reading it but now all I can think of is: 'More, more, more.'

I just, adore this fic, I love it and want to read more of it, desperately. You did a beautiful job on this story, the characterizations are right on and I thoroughly enjoy the dialogue and action in this wonderful story. I have completely fallen in love with it and want to desperately read more.

Please update it, please. Even if you don't, thank you for sharing this wonderfully beautiful story.
twisterblake
2009-02-21 . chapter 2
great chapter
Maphisto86
2009-01-18 . chapter 1
Whoa ... More then a year. Quite the hiatus but I am still checking in once and awhile.
lnky
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Nice fanfiction. I liked it, and I hope to see more soon (it doesnt' look like it's going to be the case, but still).

Happy New Year, by the way (you didn't have any review from 2009 :p).
Esseker
2008-12-25 . chapter 20
when will be ready the next chapter,ha?go on please!
Cyranothe2nd
2008-11-28 . chapter 20
Why haven't you written more?? *frustrated* I have to know what happens on the planet! And If Luke turns completely evil. And if Vesra continues to be awesome or not!
Idiot7
2008-09-10 . chapter 20
Why haven't you updated in three days, seven months, and one year
Vasara
2008-08-25 . chapter 20
And once again I find myself reading this one story of yours, even when I already know how it's going to end - in a cliffhanger. I reread a caption here, a few lines there and all of a sudden I'm fully immersed in the story again. And then the sudden end... :( I havta say, I love The Souls of Demons. I truly do. There's something so profoundly sad and beautiful about Luke's reluctant fall and Anakin's slow rediscovery of himself... I'm amazed how believingly you've succeeded in telling their stories. With every reading. So thank you..

I don't know if you are ever going to continue the story or if you even have the time for it anymore, I just hope that someday you will. I do know, however, that I'm going to stick around for it until the Internet is no more :) 'Til then, I guess I have to keep imagining myself how the rest of the plot will play out (sadly, I'm not that good of a writer) and keep reading what we already got, of course.


PS. Wish you all the well..!
dandeliondreams
2008-07-05 . chapter 20
Oh, NO!

I started reading without checking the update date... and NOW look where it's gotten me--stuck in a cliffhanger written a year ago, with little chance of being updated any time soon. Dangit, I really need to avoid un-updated, incomplete fics. They just end up driving me insane when I reach the end and notice the lack of a next-chapter-button.

I've seen this story several times in other people's Favorites, and came ambling over to see what the fuss was about. A few times, actually; I was deterred when I met "Darth Eivel" because I thought it wasn't a very creative Sith name... y'know, evil? But today I decided to go past the first couple chapters... and I got sucked in. Your fic is like a black hole. Its event horizon is around chapter three...

Anyways. I though it was all great, except for the Sith name "Eivel" and the fact that Anakin looks young. It's stupid, but I just can't picture Luke and Leia being the same age as their father...

Take pity on me, please? Update?

~ Lena
Anythingoes
2008-06-25 . chapter 20
Hi! Just wanted to say this is a great fic! Excellent characterization. Only complaint would be that this cliffhanger has lasted a really long time (dontcha hate how real life sneaks up on you? ^_^)Please don't leave us hanging forever!
StoryEditor
2008-03-26 . chapter 20
Now this one great story, lots of character depth,action,drama, and adventure but judging from the last update this story is on the edge of being abandoned which is something I do not look foward to but it is the write of every author to drop a story if neccessay but if you plan to do it I wish you would have done it before writing twenty chapters and getting me hooked "sigh" oh well but if you suddenly decide to pick this story back up I have three suggestions dont add to much family love,dont make Leia more powerful than Luke(if there is anything I hate it is reading about my favorite character losing to his younger sister)and finaly since leia is getting trained by Anakin who judging from the path of this story will probably get his own training soon, give luke some kind of new dark mentor after all he never finished his training with the emperor...okay fine I admit it I just want luke to be evil and incredibly powerful but this is your story so I dont get to call the shots
Froggy
2008-02-06 . chapter 8
1 full year! Maybe a post is in the future..? *hopeful* One year wait is better than nothing! :D This story is too good to let it die! :)
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