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| CSI4CoolBeans 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG I loved it, very very Sad, yet beautiful. |
| oval 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so good. What an interesting point of view. And I totally thought it was Greg that died at first too. For such a morbid theme, that was a nice, hopeful ending. Kind of bittersweet. I usually hate reading fics with character deaths, but this was wonderful. |
| Beaglicious 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. |
| Jaby 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseDamn, that was a good one. I nearly had tears in my eyes! It really is a pitiy you gave up on CSI, you and Burked were one of my most favorite authors! |
| MidnightBlue88 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuse"If I had to spend eternity inside a Dust Devil, I would hang around to haunt him just out of spite." Now, that was funny. I thought the whole thing was, actually. Very funny, even when it was very sad. I also loved this: "All that time I thought he was distant, it turns out he was trying to control this side of himself. Something hurt him – deeply – and he’s so afraid of what will happen if he ever loses control." Very nice insight. I loved the theme of Sara always waiting for Gil to tell her how he felt, even after she died. That was very in character and very poignant. I loved the ending. Great job. |
| Stahchild 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseoh I'm so gone. I'm an emotional wreck just reading that, my eyes are burning from the combination of tears and the glare of the computer screen. So sad, but so well written. |
| Cherrydrops12 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWOW, THAT WAS UM DIFFERENT, librain; stop shouting! sush. me; (whispering) sorry. (still whispering) anyway as i was saying, i like this story |
| rockybudi 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseoh that was so sad i loved it very well done :) |
| spongebob 2005-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abusegeez thats so sad... my eyes have teared up |
| committed 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuseOh Mossley you made me cry. You are such a good writer you should write a book. |
| scigeek 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseDamn. That was sad and beautiful at the same time. |
| Going Crusade 2005-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOh my God. Tissue, anyone? Awh. This story, apart that it goes to my favourite stories list with a wosh was unf*ingbelievable. I have no words really, other than thank you! |
| lalaforte 2005-06-12 ch 1, | abuseOh that was so sad! I almost cried over it (and I never cry)! You're a really good writer, and I'm beginning to read my way through all of your stories. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! ~K |
| barenakedrachel 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseHm... you know, I enjoyed this. I actually have this thing for cemetaries... TMI? Well, I like them. I like to take walks in them and look at all the names and wonder what the people were like. I'm a little odd, I know. I also had this crazy dream once back in high school that I died and it was quite a bit like this story, I mean the perspective of the dead on the living world they've left behind. It was freaky yet fascinating to dream of being dead and to be right next to the people you love but they can't see you... |
| jenny-o 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseThat's so damn sad! |