hey this one is good too. i like it alot. yeah you're right they do make a cute couple, have you writen that long fic about them yet? anyhow good story

it's good .i agree kyou and kagura sould be together!

Wow. Look at me, I'm logged in and everything. Anyway, I'm going around reviewing your stuffs, because I'm a nice non-lazy person. (Look at me!) Anyway, if I may, my review is as follows:

I see lots of little spelling/grammar mistakes. Nothing huge, but you might consider exporting the text and editing it. It's certainly readable, but the image gives an impression of the artist, if you follow me.

Anyway, I can't say I watch the show a lot, but I have seen the entire series at least 3 times over, so I'll allow myself to say, I think you have Kagura a bit OOC. Of course, it's YOUR story, and that's cool. Also, the idea seems to be that she's a different person, in which case that would make a little more sense. Still, that bothered me.

Yes, okay! Excellent, mate. It's wicked.

Hi.I'm ruby loves little sis.I want to say I totally agree about kyo/kagura!There so sweet together!Also the fic was sad but good.I enjoyed it!Bye!

I see,one shot..i think this would be a good story but its still good short. I feel kinda sorry for Kagura

Ah, the sadness! The sweetness! I want to smile and cry at the same time. This is beautifully written and I really, really loved reading it. I swear, my eyes are misting as I write this. I can't say how much I enjoyed this look into Kagura's mind. I think you hit her personality dead on and the style you used to write it was perfect to capture it. Kagura being happy for Kyou and yet still loving him is exactly in character in my opinion and I love how you mentioned Tohru's opening him up. It makes it even more realistic to give credit for his change where it's due and it's also another thing that makes Kagura so in character here. I'm really sucking at saying what I think of this fic because you've stunned me speechless. Excellent job!

I run Neko Ino, which is a Kyou and Kagura fanfiction collection. I would LOVE to host this fic there if you don't mind. All credit would go to you, of course. You can find the site at nekoino (dot) forever-rain (dot) com if you'd like to check it out. My email is there as well as in my bio. I think this fic would be a wonderful addition there. Whatever your answer, you did a truly fantstic job with this fic and I would love to see more Kyou and Kagura work from you in the future. Lovely job!

that was so beautful! *-*
I like KaguraxKyo though D:
NO KYO START LIKING KAGURA OR I'LL SHOOT JOO!
...>>; wait i like kyo too, so...
hey, i think im teh first to review :D omg...special!